Hey, welcome to Dakka.
This is an ok list, but is a bit mis-matched in places.
I would probably rate Captains as almost the worst BA HQ (although in this list format, probably not all that bad) even avioiding the special characters, a Librarian would be more useful, even though you have the Lib Dread.
I like your elites, although i would probably never give a dread extra armour, even though it is useful.
The main problem i have with this list, is your mech elements. You have 3 Dreads, 2 Rhinos and a Stormraven. Stormraven needs to reserve or its dead first turn. Which means you then have a drop podding dread and two rhinos on the board. Most armies have enough anti-tank weapons to slow down/immobile/wreck those in first turn. The assault squad i don't know wether you plan to deep strike or just jump around. Neither will help in this list i don't think.
What i would suggest you do, is try and find some dread build lists on dakka and see how they are done. But i don't think your troop section (other than Death Company and Dread) really complement the dread style. Maybe think about a second Stormraven....
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