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Yes thats right, its a fantasy vs a 40k mix, IF you don't like this idea just tell me So far I have written a draft of it and thus far i am pleased with it. Though my grammar sucks I will give you chunks of the story at a time.

For those of you who don't know what Azeroth is here ya go http://www.wowwiki.com/Azeroth_%28world%29

It is the World of Warcraft world and as a former Warcraft player i thought eh what the helk its never be done before so lets do a fantasy vs 40k mix except attacking warcraft. Basically the Space Marines sent there believe this 'magic' is pyschic abilities and the rest of the races are xenos. Elementals are Daemonic possessions of the world and the humans are tainted and must be exterminated if you love Warcraft please do not read this.

Asherian Command is no-way related to Blizzard Entertainment, Wc3, World of Warcraft, Frozen throne or any of the following characters. This is a Fan-Parody just to make fun of Warcraft and have an invasion by the Wanderers.

I will not have any world of Warcraft lore or anything heeding the story line but there will be references to characters from it. And also characters from role-plays that center on Azeroth this is just a parody not to make thousands of players angry at me for thinking XD

Anyway The Chapter Attacking the Planet is the Wanderers Chapter who are known to be under strength and this campaign will only contain 350 Space Marines, and anyone else that wishes to destroy in the destruction of the planet. There is an Imperial Guard Regiment alongside it (You choose who they are), There is an Ordo Xenos Group, A Small Storm Crusader Squad of 10 Marines (Guardian Squad with an attached Grand Guardian Who is a Vulkan equal-vent).

The Leaders of the Imperial Force are....
Archangel Tyraelis (not taken from diablo)
Angel Prince Gavreel
Angel Prince Keltizifiel
Chaplain Devin
Imperial Guard Commander _______
Ordo Xenos Inqusitior _______
Grand Guardian Veltor
Imperial Guard Lord Commissar _______

I have written a draft but it was mostly just to see if i could do it.

I will rewrite it. But anyway here is the chapter....
Chapter 1 Turning Point of Steel

The Strike Craft Del-Mekai (Fury of Light) floated above a blue world with 2 moons, both white crystalline in structure.

The meditation chamber as it was known as had a perfect picture of the planet below 3 great land masses, and a single storm in the middle. The Astrates that sat in meditation cross legged looked at this spectacle of the cosmos. A truly beautiful world, too bad it must be put to the flame. He thought, never before had he cared, he quickly push it aside.

From behind him came another Astrates claded in darkgreen armor, The Iron like doors slide up as the Astrates waved towards the rest of his retinue.

“Angel Prince Gavreel,” The Astrates bowed.

Gavreel wove his hand in acknowledgement of the astrates. Gavreel pointed towards the place for him to stand. Gavreel Stood up his robes clang to him, nothing more than a monk he looked like compared to the other magnificently claded Astrates. From behind the other Astrates in Darkgreen armor they brought a human who had been tortured, a soldier by the looks of him.

“Gavreel, we have done as you say and we have tortured this being until he could not tell us no more. The creatures we face below on that planet are xenos and many are their numbers." The Astrates pointed towards the planet.

Gavreel looked at the planet feeling uneased by this.

The Astrates Continued. "The Planet below is called Azeroth. It has 3 large land masses and a giant storm in the middle on the other side of the planet is a super-continent but it is riddled with storms and no useful resources are found on it. Though land masses that have been Dubbed by the local 'Kalimidor', 'Northrend' and 'Azeroth' have stores of resources that could be useful to the Imperium and our chapter. Not only that but previous elements that were rarer than expected, the planet below has an over abundance of this material.”

Gavreel nodded his approval. "Thank you Valin, your scouting of the planet was definitely worth the time. The Wanderers are in debt to the Storm Crusaders."

Valin bowed, the other two astrates were claded in golden armor like that of the custodes but their helmets were stylied with features of the storm and the dragon the icon of the Storm Crusaders Guardians.

Angel Prince Gavreel looked at the warrior who was held by a Guardian. “Before we kill this human because of the taint he possesses, I must know his name. As I will take his life.”

The warrior looked up with his battered face, his broken face was beyond recognition as the Astrates had done their duty. He spoke but his voice was still muffled. “I’m a Tirion Fordring the holy paladin of the Alliance of Lordaeron! You bastard! You do not know who you are dealing with you traitorous wench!”

“Traitor?” Gavreel questioned. He strode over to the so called Tirion, Gavreel drew his sabre and pushed against the traitiorious humans neck. "You are the traitor to humanity as you practice daemonic sorcery, This world shall burn, but you will be the first to die."

"So be it, I will be one with the light!" Tirion spat.

Gavreel laughed, "More likely one with death." Gavreel pushed the sabre and heard the sound of the death of the human traitor.

Gavreel cleaned the sabre with his robe as he looked at the rest of his company within the meditation room. "Valin i need you to deliver a message to the Crusade we are scouring this planet and we are going to claim it for the Imperium of Man and for the Emperor."

Valin bowed and exited the room through the steel door sliding down as the room was vacant with just a pool of blood left by tirion. Gavreel sighed. "And for the love of the Emperor get a serf to clean this damn mess up!"

(End of chapter 1)
Tirion in wiki http://www.wowwiki.com/Tirion_Fordring basically the guardians just went in stole him and ran away.
Gavreel by the way is known as the Angel of Fury for once he did throw a knife or something at the prisoner instead executed him in a 'honorable' way.
Angel Prince = Master of the Chapter (Captain with bonuses)

Anyway what do you all think?

Chapter 2


Gavreel looked at the rest of the council of the wanderers they all looked silently at the planet in the war room. The War room of the Battle Barge Nirvaina was spectacular.

Black obsidian floors and black steel walls revealed a table with electrical wires revealing a hologram of the planet and its two moons.

“So Gavreel what is so bad about this planet?” Asked keltizfiel.

Gavreel looked at the rest of the gathered Wanderers, he knew this was the largest gathering of Wanderers since the Elymia’s Gate. But still a wonder to have 9 of the 24 Angel Princes and 2 of the 12 Arch Angels.

“This Planet.” He began.

“It is known as Azeroth, in itself it is a rich world which can help our chapter rebuild its once mighty fleet. The Adamantium below the planet would allow us to build a keep and also allow the construction of an entire fleet. The only problem with this planet is that its inhabitants have allied itself with xenos and creatures of evil, they constantly rage wars and daemons and creatures of the dark are summoned. A Pervious Imperial Guard Regiment was sent here to explore it, but was attacked by foul Daemons that are named by its inhabitants as nothing more than the Elemental Lords, this world’s inhabitants are to be put to the flame by order of the Holy Ordo Xenos and our Hierarchic!”

The Warhost Commanders nodded and cheered their allegiance to destroy the planets entire inhabitants.

Archangel Tryael who was heading the Campagin nodded. “So be it, Brothers Deploy yourself according to your specialists and I shall go after the hardest region here with my justicars.” He pointed towards a kingdom of Midevil humans and some sort of eldar making.

Gavreel nodded. “We all have our orders. Let us go to war.”


The Council nodded. The other Astrates from other 2 other chapters nodded and exited the room, Valin the Grand Guardian waited till the others parted. Only Tyrael, Gavreel, and Valin remained in the room.

Valin broke the silence between them and spoke. "Gavreel, I will lead the assualt on the higher daemons on this plain, our sweeps have indiciated five massive gatherings of Warp Disturbances in the planet. I will lead my Guardian Squad and slay the daemons."

Gavreel nodded his approval. "That would be good and take care, Old friend I want to have a few more drinks."

Valin Smiled and bowed and left the room.
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The Drop pod chambers of the Nirvania were claded in gold and sculptures of past heroes of the chapter. The Nirvania was the most ancient ship in the Wanderer's Fleet. No doubt it had seen many exterminatus's and campaigns in its lifetime.

There were 90 droppods on the Nirvania all glimmering with the ancient armor of their previous colors.

The Wanderers stood at attention as was the ritual before going out to war. The crusade pre-ritual or better known by the wanderers as The Initiation of the first

Keltiizfiel the Angel Prince stood next to his honor guard, he stood at attention as the long line of 150 Astrates watched as Arch Angel Tyrael walked into the room. He spoke with a commanding voice. "Fellow Wanderers, we march to the war against this planet. Let us bring the enemy to justice for their dark deeds. We go to war!"

There was an uproar from the Wanderers.

Short and sweet. Just like how Keltizfiel likes the Initiations.

They all entered into the droppods and prepared to be dropped onto the planet below... Keltizfiel knew of what they faced he hoped his coordinates alone with his honor guards weren't screwed up at all.

Should I continue this or should I not?
Because I have 4 more chapters which I am developing.