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ok this is my first backround story of my founded chaos marines chapter the souless

after ahriman went into exile another band of sorcerers branced off from the coven, they wanted not to concour the galaxy for themselves but to help the deamonic pacts of tzeench more notably the blue scribes.
even though the demonic hoards are eternal and forver lasting the souless belive in that they should presrve the deamons to gain forever lasting gifts and also belive that without their intervetion to help the blue scribes then blue scribes will fail their quest to find tzeenchs crystal staff.

the only proven existence of the souless for the imperium is when watch fortress dominion of the deathwatch was completely destroyed by deep-striking terminators with lightning strike tactics and a hoard of deamons of tzeench backing them up, everything was destroyed but could be salvaged by the adeptus machanicus there was only one thing that could not be found in the dominiums vault and that was a massive diamond which with vile deacration withered all over it...

ok so that was my first ever40k backround story fell free for comments and i would like constructive critisism for this as i am eager to learn more fluff, after all...

knowlage is power

Needs spell checking...
Instead of "everything was destroyed but could be salvaged by the adeptus machanicus there was only one thing that could not be found in the dominiums vault and that was a massive diamond which with vile deacration withered all over it... "
Try, "The fortress was left unmarked and untouched. Even the bodies of the garrison were unmarked. All that had been touched was the vault. The door lay in a smouldering pile of slag and only one artifact had been taken. A large diamond. It is a testament to the diamonds apparent power that the Deathwatch now chase the Souless at every opportunity hoping to gain either the diamond itself or information leading to its return"

It's an interesting concept though...