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Dorset, Uk

My take on Grimnar for a local painting comp. I'd like to know what you guys think?

Oh and sorry some of the photos are the wrong way round...I was feeling lazy when I uploaded them









What do you think?




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Kent UK

Looks absolutely amazing!!!!! Love it! No criticism just praise!!!!!

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That is a pretty realistic representation of a wolf's fur. The base is what will help this model stand out for being judged.

My only critique is that the groin area and thigh/knee pads are not shaded. A careful black lining or grey lining may help this, or just a wash, but it took a while for me to notice that.

Good luck with the competition!

Edit:

I forgot about one of my favorite parts of this piece, the freehand on the shoulderpad. I can't for the life of me ever get that to look right!

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Dorset, Uk

Thanks guys..hmm..it may be the photo because i'm sure I shaded it. Otherwise I missed it!

It's in the local GW store cabinet atm so can't do much about it..thanks though, I'll bear it in mind for next time!


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Yeah the great wolf was a bugger to paint! I'm still not entirely happy with the head but I was going back and forth and this was about as good as I could get..

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Austria

I think he looks really good. Kudos to you.

 
   
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Look great. I think it would look even better if you added a blue wash to the armor plates.


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Dorset, Uk

Thanks

Ninja, out of interest..why a blue wash? wouldn't that make him look a bit ultra mariney?


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Boston, MA

Man oh man I like that yellow bolter! It makes that arm as interesting as the axe, which is tough competition. I dig the freehanding and subtle shading/highlighting, and the fur is very convincing. I don't know if it's intentional or not, but there's something weird going on with the paint around the inside of his axe arm elbow. I'm not a big fan of the weathering on his feet either, since it looks more like unintentional green paint splotches on an otherwise terriffic paintjob. From head to base this is a really solid model though, and I like it a lot.

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Planet Earth

Great paint job. I would only add a tad more shading on his face

   
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Ireland

The freehand on the shoulder pads is top notch man

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Regular Dakkanaut





Dorset, Uk

Yeah I know what you mean about the weathering...that's what you get for putting the finishing touches on a model at 5am I guess....It's weathering powder which looks a little better in person but I wasn't sure about it. I think I'll give it a miss next time..thanks for the feedback everyone!


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adary wrote:Great paint job. I would only add a tad more shading on his face



I agree, it's a great job only the face/hair seem to be washed out a bit and get lost in the model. The face should be the focal point. Maybe make the hair slightly darker to frame the face in a little.

   
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Dorset, Uk

Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll bear it in mind for next time


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mad prop. i realy cant thing of any thing else to say about it


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Dubai, U.A.E.

Yep, that base is looking great

 
   
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Fantastic looking model, I like your paint job better than the one in the codex.

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Dorset, Uk

Kreedos wrote:Fantastic looking model, I like your paint job better than the one in the codex.


Wow, thanks!

Not got a Space wolves codex so I don't know how good it is but since it was probably by 'eavy metal I'll take that as a high compliment indeed!


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Glad the rest of yous like him too!

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