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Hey guys so another installment to my Black Templar army. I have finally completed my Marshal w/ lighting claws. I think I might change somethings up so please let me know what you think.

These are the things I am thinking I might apply:
hanging chains from the lighting claws
the front cloth hanging from his belt
standard on or off the marshal's backpack

As always any and all C&C is highly welcomed. Always trying to make myself a better painter.

Thanks everybody!!!

Keep the standard thingy, it balances out the heavily built base nicely. Im not sold on the loin cloth thing, I'd remove that and replace it with some chainmail/chains/armour plates. Other than that, the lightning claws look sick.

Ok so keep the standard vote 1
Lose the cloth in front vote 1

I am kind of thinking the same thing with the chains instead of the cloth.

Like the other guy said, the paper on the legs could be replaced with chains and hooks. Hes got writing and stuff on the banner, the scroll on the legs is just exceess and clutters the model. The face and claws are awesome. The chain fist is sweet, totally badass,

It's literally a CHAIN FIST!
Lol

but I'm gonna agree with Soulgrinder, I think that the parchment on the legs looks kind of excessive and some chains and other metal bits and bobs would look a mite better. Other than that, It looks awesome, the pose is very "action"

Alright so now the vote is 3 to remove the front cloth. Well I think I will probably be removing it and replacing it with something Monday or Tuesday. Thanks for the help guys. If anybody else has any ideas or suggestions to improve this guy please feel free to comment and help me out. Thanks everybody.

I agree on removing/replacing the loincloth. Other than that, though, I wouldn't change a thing.
And that white is amazing, as are the claws and the parchment on the sword.

i would also remove the cloth thing. the rest of the model looks very good.

Looks amazing! I agree about the parchment loincloth though, I think either a thinner one or a set of chains would be better.

Lovin it! The loin scroll looks good in my opinion. I love the claws man! Im looking for an awesome effect like that for my Terminators Thunder Hammer that I posted today, give my model a glance if you get the chance and give me some feedback on how you got that effect on the claws. Keep it up man your army is looking sharp.