MFletch wrote:I would get Telion instead of the camo cloaks. He is worth the extra 20 points.
Actually I think you lack long ranged attack. So a vindi and dev. squad will not be good. Either 2 preds or 2 dev. squads are needed.
Also at this points range you do need a cc hammer. I would go for command squad with stuff rather than the assault termies that have been suggested.
I would go for mulitmelta attack bike instead of two of your bikes. Then double gun the special weapons, so maybe double plasma. Then I would not go for a powerweapon as it will not help you in cc and you need keep away cc anyway.
Your land speeder would like a partner, but I guess he is a suicide deepstrike unit in general.
I have no idea how good your storm unit will be. I would not go with a powerfist but instead just some meltabombs.
Most of this is useless advice and you shouldnt follow it.
Devastators are usually not worth it if you have models for something else. 4 Missile Launchers are still acceptable, though. Command Squad is never better than Assault Terminators if you keep them at the same price level. If you drop 2 bikes then the squad no longer counts as a troops choice. The
CCW scouts are a good choice, I fit a Combi-melta in mine. Do not ever take Melta Bombs over a Powerfist.
Your list looks decent, however I don't know why the Captain instead of a Librarian. The Bike Captain capitalises on using bikes as troops, but you only have 1 squad of that. The second Tactical Squad needs a Rhino. Marines always need their vehicles.