I like the use of lots of cult troops, but the individual squads could be optimised slightly.
For the plague marines, swap the flamer for a melta, otherwise you'll be wasting one or the other shot depending on what you're shooting at.
For the Bezerkers, I personally don't think that the plasma pistols are worth it, so you could save yourself 30 points and drop them. Maybe adding meltabombs to the champ might give the squad an opportunistic chance of wrecking a vehicle, but the same could be said of another powerfist.
I'd also consider dropping extra armour on the rhinos and and putting on Daemonic possession which I feel is more useful.
Lastly, if you're putting meltabombs on the lord, then perhaps drop a man or two from each of your troop choices so you've got the points for a powerfist or maybe lightning claws for your termies.
The added 500 points look fine, noise marines aren't my favourite, but if you want to run with the slaanesh theme a bit more then they have their uses. The Vindicator and DP are solid.
Just a few suggestions- hope the campaign goes well!
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