The Rhino does not need EA, in fact its a horrible upgrade for its cost.
At
BS 3 I would go for the
HF instead of the
MM on the
LSS.
ML>>HB, get a
ML for the scouts instead.
A
MM dread is meh at 1k. You need to pop the equivalent of a
LR for it to earn back its points. I would take an
AC instead. More versitile and just as good at poping side/rear armour most of the time.
Get flamers into the assault squad. I would also consider a Jump Pack Libby instead. Triple templates are nice

but the chaplin is an ok choice as well. Maybe something like this?
HQ:
Chaplin (Jump Pack) = 115
Troops:
10xTacticals (
MG+Combi-M+
MM) = 185
Rhino = 35
5xScouts (
ML+Camo) = 100
5xScouts (
CCW+
PF+Combi-M) = 110
Elites:
Dread (
AC+
HF) = 125
Pod = 35
Fast:
10xASM (2xFlamers+
PF) = 235