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Librarian- terminator armor, fw, null zone, gate of infinity- 125
Librarian- terminator armor, fw, null zone, gate of infinity- 125

Land speeder squadron- heavy bolted, assault cannon- 270
Land speeder squadron- heavy bolted, assault cannon- 270
Land speeder squadron- heavy bolted, assault cannon- 270

Predator- autocannon, lascannon sponsons- 120
Predator- autocannon, lascannon sponsons-120

Tactical squad- plasmagun, lascannon, 8x bolters- 190
Tactical squad- plasmagun, lascannon, 8x bolters- 190
Tactical squad- plasmagun, lascannon, 8x bolters- 190

Dreadnought- 2x twin linked autocannons- 125


Thoughts?

You have many elements right. your mix of fire power is good and works well together.

Just not sure about the lack of transportation for troops.
Also you will want some melta threat.
Then you need one unit to be amazing at cc.
You want to limit their firing options you offer tank, av10 or 3+ armour.