I think you are taking too many toys here, especially for a 1500 list. I think you should either completely commit to the Stormraven theme (in which case you need 2, each fully loaded) or ditch the vehicles.
If you want my thoughts on the former, here they are:
HQ: Mephiston 250
EL: Furioso Dreadnought with Blood Talons 125
TR: 5 Death Company Marines, 1 Power Fist 125
TR: DC Dreadnought with Blood Talons 125
TR: 10 Assault Marines, 2 Meltaguns, Power Fist 235
TR: 10 Assault Marines, 2 Meltaguns, Power Fist 235
HS: Stormraven 200
HS: Stormraven 200
Total: 1495
You should not deep strike with the Stormravens. They have huge footprints, so mishaps are way too likely unless you stay quite far away from the enemy. You'll obviously pop smoke for the 4+ cover, but you're still really likely to end up with a destroyed Stormraven and a stranded, raging DC. You should start them on the table if you go first, reserve them if you go second.
I'd arm them with Multi-meltas and Assault Cannons; you really need extra anti-vehicle firepower, especially anti-transport.
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