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This is my first time making an army list im wondering if its any good.

HQ
Daemon prince 110pts
Wings 20pts
Mark of Tzeentch 20pts
Warp Time 25pts

Elites
Chosen x5 90pts
Aspiring Champion 10pts
Melta Gun 10pts
Mark of Khorne 30pts
Lightning Claws x4 100pts
Rhino 35pts
Extra Armor 15pts

Troops
Plauge Marines x8 184pts
Plauge Champion 15pts
Power Fist 25pts
Combi-weapon 10pts
Meltabombs 5pts
Meltagun 10pts
Flamer 5pts
Rhino Transport 35pts

Plauge Marines x8 184pts
Plauge Champion 15pts
Power Fist 25pts
Combi-weapon 10pts
Meltabombs 5pts
Meltagun 10pts
Flamer 5pts
Rhino Transport 35pts

Berserker x8 168pts
Skull Champion 15pts
Power Fist 25pts
Plasma Pistol 15pts
Personal Icon 5pts
Rhino Transport 35pts
Extra Armor 15pts

Berserker x8 168pts
Skull Champion 15pts
Power Fist 25pts
Plasma Pistol 15pts
Rhino Transport 35pts
Extra Armor 15pts

Heavy Support
Defiler 150pts
x2 Close Combat Arms 0pts

Defiler 150pts
x2 Close Combat Arms 0pts

Summoned Daemons x8 104pts(threw these in because i had some extra points.)
Summoned Lesser Daemons

1998pts

Your gonna find that the Skull Champs Plasma pistols arent gonna help much. You should put lash on your prince so you can throw squads together and Pie plate them, maybe consider a second prince or the other option wich is even a bit cheaper. And if you take the summoned Deamons out and some of the less useful upgrades out you could probably find the points for a squad of oblits? Like Here, Melta Bombs are point fillers and you dont need them so much, take he Rhino Away from the Squad of Choseens, they can infiltrate or Out flank, take extra armour off theRhinos that dont have Zerkers in them and the deamons and you should have the points for all the stuff you need to make it really competetive. Hope that was useful!

First, please remove all individual points costs for upgrades/wargear. It is against forum regulations.

As for your list.

DPs are typically ran in pairs. They are far more effective this way. Good load-out though.

Chosen aren't really cut out for h2h. If you've already modeled them change the Mark too Slaanesh.

Drop the plasma pistols on the Zerker Champs. They're never worth the 15 points and they risk you losing a 76 point model.

You're not in dire need of flamers against a horde with two Defiler. Zerkers will probably be your strong arm with the DPs. Min size PM squad with 2x Plasma guns can sit on objectives and be just as useful. Freeing up points for my last point, some much needed ranged support.

You are lacking any real anti-tank. I would add some Obliterators / Havoc (ML or AC).

Hi Drayzero, I play Chaos myself, I'm no way near the best player out there but I've made a few comments. Hope they help.

Drayzero wrote:
HQ
Daemon prince
Wings
Mark of Tzeentch
Warp Time

I guess you have the MoT for the + 1 to the Inv save as you haven't taken a second psychic power. Perhaps the MoN might be better, making it harder for the DP to be wounded?

Drayzero wrote:Elites
Chosen x 5
Aspiring Champion
Melta Gun
Mark of Khorne
Lightning Claws x4
Rhino
Extra Armor

I would either kit these out with all meltas to make them tank hunters or with a flamer, if you're looking to do damage before an assault. The one hit from the melta is a bit of a waste, if you know, you miss.

Drayzero wrote:Troops
Plague Marines x 8
Plague Champion
Power Fist
Combi-weapon
Meltabombs
Meltagun
Flamer
Rhino Transport

As your champion already has a powerfist I think the Meltabombs are redundant. I probably would have a pair of special weapons rather than 1 of 2 different types.

Drayzero wrote:Plague Marines x 8
Plague Champion
Power Fist
Combi-weapon
Meltabombs
Meltagun
Flamer
Rhino Transport

Same as above really.

Drayzero wrote:Berserker x 8
Skull Champion
Power Fist
Plasma Pistol
Personal Icon
Rhino Transport
Extra Armor

I think losing the plasma pistols would be a good idea, you want your fists to be in combat so those could be a bad thing.

Drayzero wrote:Berserker x 8
Skull Champion
Power Fist
Plasma Pistol
Rhino Transport
Extra Armor

Same as above

Drayzero wrote:Heavy Support
Defiler
x2 Close Combat Arms 0pts

Defiler
x2 Close Combat Arms 0pts

Summoned Daemons x 8(threw these in because i had some extra points.)
Summoned Lesser Daemons

Fine

I think if you shed the stuff in bold you could probably adjust it a little bit.

HQ
Daemon prince 175pts
Wings
Mark of Nurgle
Warp Time

Daemon Prince 155pts
Wings
Mark of Slaanesh
Lash of submission

Elites
Chosen x5 230pts
Aspiring Champion
Melta Gunx5
Mark of Khorne
Rhino
Extra armor


Troops
Plauge Marines x8 299pts
Plauge Champion
Power Fist
Combi-weapon
Flamer x2
Rhino Transport
Extra Armor
Dozer blades

Plauge Marines x8 299pts
Plauge Champion
Power Fist
Combi-weapon
Flamer x2
Rhino Transport
Extra Armor
Dozer blades

Berserker x8 273pts
Skull Champion
Power Fist
Rhino Transport
Extra Armor
Combi Weapon
Dozer Blades

Berserker x8 273pts
Skull Champion
Power Fist
Rhino Transport
Extra Armor
Combi Weapon
Dozer Blades

Heavy Support
Defiler 150pts
x2 Close Combat Arms

Defiler 150pts
x2 Close Combat Arms

2004pts

Changed it up.

Drayzero wrote:
Ok i changed it up but with the change it went to 2014pts. Should i just drop the daemons or would anyone really care about going over by 14 pts?

From what I can see, you've taken out the Icon and Personal Icon so you've made the Daemons pointless, as you need an Icon for the Daemons to be summoned on to the board.

Edit: Nope, there you go, you have an Icon of Khorne still there in your Elites.

Still if they die or you are thinking of outflanking with them it's a bit risky.

Yeah i realized it after i posted, i just got rid of them and got some rhino upgrades. and edited my post.