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Kinebrach-Knobbling Xeno Interrogator





Massachusetts

Here's my first attempt, EVER, at painting something. constructive criticism welcomed!

Crappy photos are crappy... This is the only one that turned out remotely good


Skalk Bloodaxe wrote:When the Death Guard and World Eater forces split after their last battle as allies, this particular Champion simply loaded his squad into the wrong Rhino and has yet to notice.

Yggdrasil wrote:"First shalt thou take out your whole Unholy Army. Then shalt thou count to Seven, no more, no less. Seven shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be Seven. Eight shalt thou not count (bloody -fanatics), neither count thou six (fing sex-addicts), excepting that thou then proceed to Seven. Nine is right out (goddn mock seers) . Once the number seven, being the seventh number, be reached, then formest thou thy first Plague Marine squad. Likewise, thou shall marshall thy remaining troops in squads of Seven, and Seven shall be the number of brothers in each of your squad."
 
   
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Boosting Space Marine Biker





Concord, CA

It's pretty hard to comment or offer advice on the painting given the photo. Perhaps you could take a few clearer photos so that we can get a better look?

Peace is an individual conquest; it has never been a deed of the masses. 
   
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Kinebrach-Knobbling Xeno Interrogator





Massachusetts

The_Stormrider wrote:It's pretty hard to comment or offer advice on the painting given the photo. Perhaps you could take a few clearer photos so that we can get a better look?


Will do...

Skalk Bloodaxe wrote:When the Death Guard and World Eater forces split after their last battle as allies, this particular Champion simply loaded his squad into the wrong Rhino and has yet to notice.

Yggdrasil wrote:"First shalt thou take out your whole Unholy Army. Then shalt thou count to Seven, no more, no less. Seven shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be Seven. Eight shalt thou not count (bloody -fanatics), neither count thou six (fing sex-addicts), excepting that thou then proceed to Seven. Nine is right out (goddn mock seers) . Once the number seven, being the seventh number, be reached, then formest thou thy first Plague Marine squad. Likewise, thou shall marshall thy remaining troops in squads of Seven, and Seven shall be the number of brothers in each of your squad."
 
   
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Armored Iron Breaker




Lookin' fur daemons ta' fight!

From the quality of the photo i cant really tell how you did but im sure its awesome

Teh Emprah Protects
 
   
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Kinebrach-Knobbling Xeno Interrogator





Massachusetts

Better photo... figured out I have to move the camera way back and zoom in.


Skalk Bloodaxe wrote:When the Death Guard and World Eater forces split after their last battle as allies, this particular Champion simply loaded his squad into the wrong Rhino and has yet to notice.

Yggdrasil wrote:"First shalt thou take out your whole Unholy Army. Then shalt thou count to Seven, no more, no less. Seven shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be Seven. Eight shalt thou not count (bloody -fanatics), neither count thou six (fing sex-addicts), excepting that thou then proceed to Seven. Nine is right out (goddn mock seers) . Once the number seven, being the seventh number, be reached, then formest thou thy first Plague Marine squad. Likewise, thou shall marshall thy remaining troops in squads of Seven, and Seven shall be the number of brothers in each of your squad."
 
   
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Warning From Magnus? Not Listening!






Adelaide, Australia

Base?

Notice: If you notice this notice you will notice that this notice is not worth noticing
 
   
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Plastictrees





Calgary, Alberta, Canada

The photo still isn't great.

I think you should concentrate on getting nice neat base colours down before you try anything else.
Focus on getting all the paint in the right areas and in nice thin coats. Make sure one layer is dry before you go back over it (which shouldn't be a problem if your coats of paint are thin).

You might consider attaching his base to something so that you don't have to touch the model itself as you paint. Tacking it to an old lid with hot glue can be a cheap solution.

Once you've got patient, neat coats of paint down there are a lot of easy and quick shading/highlighting option you can employ.

   
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Crafty Clanrat





Groningen, Netherlands

Oh and drill the gunbarrel
   
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Kinebrach-Knobbling Xeno Interrogator





Massachusetts

plastictrees wrote:The photo still isn't great.

I think you should concentrate on getting nice neat base colours down before you try anything else.
Focus on getting all the paint in the right areas and in nice thin coats. Make sure one layer is dry before you go back over it (which shouldn't be a problem if your coats of paint are thin).

You might consider attaching his base to something so that you don't have to touch the model itself as you paint. Tacking it to an old lid with hot glue can be a cheap solution.



I know the photo is horrible, I'm doing the best I can with the old camera I'm using.
Thanks for the advice... I shall try those things in the future.
Now for more bad photos of bad paint jobs...









Thanks for the replies guys

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Skalk Bloodaxe wrote:When the Death Guard and World Eater forces split after their last battle as allies, this particular Champion simply loaded his squad into the wrong Rhino and has yet to notice.

Yggdrasil wrote:"First shalt thou take out your whole Unholy Army. Then shalt thou count to Seven, no more, no less. Seven shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be Seven. Eight shalt thou not count (bloody -fanatics), neither count thou six (fing sex-addicts), excepting that thou then proceed to Seven. Nine is right out (goddn mock seers) . Once the number seven, being the seventh number, be reached, then formest thou thy first Plague Marine squad. Likewise, thou shall marshall thy remaining troops in squads of Seven, and Seven shall be the number of brothers in each of your squad."
 
   
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Fresh-Faced New User





UK

try macro mode if your camera has one, will help with the lack of focus.

Also put a piece of paper or card behind them just to get rid of the other bits in your pics
   
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Yellin' Yoof




Houston Tx Area

If these were mine I would...paint your bases brown like graveyard earth or scorched brown. paint devlin mud over the silver on the guns.. it will age the metal and make them look worn.. paint the teeth like white or bleached bone tith with white tips.'' good luck

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If you cant beat em join em...  
   
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Hollerin' Herda with Squighound Pack







hey nice color scheme but don't think that you need to stick with it cause ork waaaghs contain lots of diffrent clans

How many Space Marines does it take to screw in a lightbulb.

6, 1 techpriest and 5 tacticals that stand around trying to pose like badasses.


An Ork, Space Marine and Eldar are walking down the road. They see a Chaos portal that has a sign on it. It says: 'say what is true or be sucked in'. The Space Marine says: "I think I'm the bravest" and walks past safely, the Eldar says: "I think I'm the most agile" and walks past safely. The Ork says: "Me thinks..." and gets sucked into the portal.
 
   
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Kinebrach-Knobbling Xeno Interrogator





Massachusetts

snagrod wrote:hey nice color scheme but don't think that you need to stick with it cause ork waaaghs contain lots of diffrent clans


True but I really like the death skulls... I'll definitely vary it though, these are just my first few models and I'm just trying to get the hang of really basic painting techniques...

also, my failure to paint the teeth is a result on my being a bit short on teef to buy paint with.

thanks for the replies guys

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/09/27 01:23:42


Skalk Bloodaxe wrote:When the Death Guard and World Eater forces split after their last battle as allies, this particular Champion simply loaded his squad into the wrong Rhino and has yet to notice.

Yggdrasil wrote:"First shalt thou take out your whole Unholy Army. Then shalt thou count to Seven, no more, no less. Seven shall be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting shall be Seven. Eight shalt thou not count (bloody -fanatics), neither count thou six (fing sex-addicts), excepting that thou then proceed to Seven. Nine is right out (goddn mock seers) . Once the number seven, being the seventh number, be reached, then formest thou thy first Plague Marine squad. Likewise, thou shall marshall thy remaining troops in squads of Seven, and Seven shall be the number of brothers in each of your squad."
 
   
 
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