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This is a thread about the fluff I have made for my own space marine chapter. NO PICTURES WILL BE TAKEN, just fluff and a picture from the space marine painter
Fluff:
Captain Gabriel Vanktouv.
A veteran of many battles and a heroic leader, Gabriel is an enigma. At the age of seven Gabriel fought to save his homeland from the dark elder. He killed countless with his axe and when his axe broke he killed more with his nails. And when his hands were nailed to the floor he killed them with his teeth. Now he has an undying hatred for the dark elder and will purge them from the galaxy single handed if need be. At the age of 6 his dad gave him an axe and when he rose to captain he had the mechanicuim transform it into a power weapon
War gear: artificer armor, power Axe, storm shield, melta bombs, digital weapons

Wissian’s lost.
Wissians lost are what remains of a thirty man terminator assault squad that followed the dark elder into one of their webway gates. Wissian was last seen shouting back over his shoulder to captain Gabriel ‘keep the ovens cooking, I will be hungry when I get back’
Thunder hammer and storm shields.

The Shadows.
The Shadows are a scout squad specially trained in assignation against dark elder leaders and key targets. Using adapted sniper rifles, they pinpoint critical points on their targets with ruthless efficiency.
War Gear: Snipers and Camo cloaks.

Angels of fury.
This five man assault squad is famed for jumping right onto enemy raiders and ravagers, defeating the Eldar pilots before blowing the vehicle with melta charges. The sergeant of the angels of fury, a ‘Zero Stein’, is feared among the Imperium for his short temper, his apparent insanity, and his powerfist.
War gear: flamer, melta bombs, power fist, combat shield, power pistol.

Emperors Blade.
The Emperors Blade is a 10 man tactical squad under the leadership of a Nathaniel Victus, a man praised for his calm under pressure and cold bloodedness towards the Dark Eldar. With a long history of conflict and pain, the squad is one of the most respected squad in the chapter, as well as the most bionic, with Nathaniel boasting: a bionic leg, Bionic face and two bionic arms, due to his run in with a Talos pain engine, although he did defeat the infernal engine in combat, he lost most of his body due to the acids and chemicals the creature fought with, surviving until the apothecary could replace the limbs through sheer will power.
Wargear: power sword, rocket launcher, flamer, melta bombs.

Tactical Squad Raphael.
A relatively new squad, with only one battle under its belt as full fledged marines, squad Raphael is under the leadership of the veteran Raphael. Their hatred for the Dark Eldar is raw, not tempered in the fires of war, and as such they rush heedlessly into danger baying for blood, their ferocity in battle similar to that of the famed ‘Death Company’.
War Gear: Flamer, powerfist, plasma pistol, melta bombs.

This is not finished yet so I will update it, I still need to do fluff on a librarian, a chaplain, and some other stuff, as well as chapter fluff



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almost forgot the image.

This is Brother-Sergeant Raphael,

The only thing I'd change is that your Captain's name is Gabriel, as well the name of one of your tactical squads/sergeants. Recycling a name like that can be confusing, especially if you ever write anything involving the two of them together. Plus it adds to the originality factor if everyone/thing has a unique and different name.

you know what, I just realized that, thanks man.
Now I need a name, any ideas
I'm thinking Raphael, or Alucard

Alucard is much more different, Raphael more 40k y

Raphael it is

Edit: this wont be updated with more fluff anytime soon, since I have GCSE at the start of November, so no time to churn out the fluff

Can you post a link to the pic instead? it isnt visible here