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Irradiated Baal Scavanger





UK



Hey Guys. I'm new to the game and a first time poster. I am hoping I could get some feed back and help. I will be playing some 750 pt games soon against Orks, Dark Eldar & Tau. I have done my first Army list to up against the Orks and was wondering what you guys think...

Scout Bikers x 3 + Locator Beacon
Tac Squad x 10. 1 Flamer, 1 Missile Launcher
Drop pod for Tac Squad
Termies x 5
DC x 5
DC Dreadnought

This is a rough draft so far, Critiques and suggestions are most welcome. Cheers guys.

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Welcome.

Soaring Faeces is right about the army list though, you'll get better answers here: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/forums/show/14.page

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Irradiated Baal Scavanger





UK

Thanks Guys, Will do.

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Ragin' Ork Dreadnought






Ingelheim am Rhein, Germany

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Ragin' Ork Dreadnought






Ingelheim am Rhein, Germany

You havent gotten that much feedback on your list yet, right?

Well heres what i (as a sm disliker and hence rules-not-knower) can tell you:

You have to stick to the force organisation chart. This tells you to use at least one hq, so include a captain or someone.



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maybe drop the bikes for a captain, and youll have a nice asault force.

Wait, are you teleporting the termies? dont, cause youll only have the dc on the table for your enemies army to shoot at.

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