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Hi dakka,

I was wondering if my fluff for my dark eldar fits in with the fluff, or horribly changing it. So here's the fluff for review:

Kabal name: Kabal of the vengeful soul

An Archon whose name I haven't thought of yet , exiled from Commoragh for treason, led a group of wyches in a bloodbath, ultimately leading to their escape from the dark city. They now currently seek revenge against their brethren, preferring to enact their perverse desired against fellow eldar than upon lesser races. They harbour a deep loathing of the daemonic, in particular slaanesh and his followers.

Army composition is mainly wyches, support vehicles, and the occasional dark eldar who wishes to exact vengeance upon the foolish rulers of the dark city. Specialism of the force is fast, hard hitting units, much the better to ensure lots of prisoners. They have been known to work with eldar of craftworld altansar as they feel pity for their rejected brethren and their battle against chaos.

That's all I have so far, opinions? Sorry if its poorly written, I have a headache and can't think very well currently lol

I thought Wyches were led by Succubi, not Archons.

Discussion of official published stuff goes in 40k Background; original fluff goes in Dakka Fiction. Moving.

Mechanized Space Corpse wrote:feel pity

No. No, they don't.

The rest of your fluff could fit in I think, though they would be a bit of a deviation from your standard Deldar. I mean, I think most Deldar dislike Slaanesh, because she wants to eat them and all that. But a hatred for the demonic? Not really, they're basically Slaaneshi demons themselves.

Also, enacting their dark desires is, implicitly, feeding Slaanesh.