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[HQ]

Librarian
-Null Zone + Avenger

[Elites]

Dreadnought
-2x TLAutocannon

Dreadnought
-2x TLAutocannon

Sternguard Veteran Squad (5-man)
-2x Combi-Melta
-Rhino

[Troops]

Tactical Squad
-Meltagun
-Missile Launcher
-Rhino

Tactical Squad
-Meltagun
-Missile Launcher
-Rhino

Tactical Squad
-Meltagun
-Missile Launcher
-Rhino

[Fast Attack]

Land Speeder
-Typhoon Missile Launcher
-Heavy Bolter

Land Speeder
-Typhoon Missile Launcher
-Heavy Bolter

[Heavy Support]

Predator
-Autocannon
-Sponson Heavy Bolters

Predator
-Autocannon
-Sponson Heavy Bolters

I like the mix of shooting and I also like the rhinos coming forward.

Try going for full meltaguns for the sternguard and try to give them 6 guys.
Maybe I would have only two tactical squads.

I think you may find having your rhinos as the following works better:
Rhino melta, combimelta, missile
Rhino melta, combimelta, missile
Rhino 2 heavy flamers, 4 combimeltas.

The point being having a flamer option for infantry and having the second melta shot the first turn you can get into range.