As great as PFs are, your kinda tossing the advantage of the 5 Init to the curb by not taking PWs.
I also think you need to drop the number of troops down to 5-6 to give you more of them, as 3 troop choices are pretty light at 1500. Your Rhinos should have combi-meltas or Havoc Launchers (depending on assault or defensive units). If you drop the fists, drop the champs all together.
I also feel with only two template producing units out there, I am not sure if Lash is even worth it over something like warptime. If you actually have more troop choices that give you havoc launchers, maybe it might be worth it. But I think you need a second DP and their job is to take out the other DPs with their higher Init to strike first in close combat. You need every advantage you can get, don't waste them.
I would also take a long, hard look at Lightining claw terminator champs in a LR. A unit of 3-5 might be a potent force. Throwing a Chainfist and combi-melta terminator to give them some anti-armor punch is an option.
This is something along the lines I am talking about...
DP - 160pts
Wings, MoS, WT
DP - 160pts
Wings, MoS, WT
5x Noise Marines - 170pts
5x Sonic blasters, Rhino, Combi-melta
5x Noise Marines - 170pts
5x Sonic blasters, Rhino, Combi-melta
5x Noise Marines - 170pts
5x Sonic blasters, Rhino, Combi-melta
5x Noise Marines - 170pts
5x Sonic blasters, Rhino, Combi-melta
5x Noise Marines - 200pts
2x Sonic blasters, Blastmaster, Rhino, Havoc Launcher
2x Oblit - 150pts
2x Oblit - 150pts
1500pts
I couldn't fit in the Terminators, as the unit is around 500pts (I put the combi-melta on the LR and had 4 Terminators). I had 6 Oblits and no champs, but it came out to 1490pts and I couldn't squeeze in those points anywhere, so I dropped two Oblits and 2 sonic blasters from the camping unit to get a 5th troop selection. Another option is to drop the 5th troop (170pts) and you can get 3 Champs with melta bombs and power weapons for an additional 30pts to the attacking squad (figuring in dropping the 5th sonic blaster). This gives you back your 5th Oblit and with the last 5pts, add on a 3rd sonic blaster on the camping squad.
If anything, I hope this helps and gives you some ideas. Good luck!
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