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I like making a little booklet with my army roster and the fluff that goes behind it, I generally get 2 printed, one for me and one for my opponent to borrow. So I wanted to get some input on the fluff I am coming up with for what I hope will be a pretty decent tournament army. First part is the army list its self, followed by names for the units, troops, tanks and tank commanders. Last but not least the fluff.

Army List (1750 pts):
HQ Castelllan Crowe
5X Troop Purifier Squad 2 X Psycannon w/ Razorback Twin Linked Assault Cannon Psybolt Ammunition
1X Troop Terminator Squad Nemesis 5 X Force Halberd 1XIncenerator
2X Heavy Dreadnought 2 X Twin Linked Autocannon Psybolt Ammunition

Commander
Magnus Manlius

Imperator Gladio Scriptor
“The Emperor’s Sword”
Justicar Ferox Kenar
Terminator Kasen Lammol
Terminator Madron Sesack
Terminator Aestus Doath
Terminator Ulciscor Ates

Flammae Iudicii
“Flames of Judgment”
Knight Justus Isshon
Purifier Dolor Athwar
Purifier Brencis Bressr
Purifier Purgo Brinlor
Purifier Titus Dreshsul

Interfector Daemoniorum
“The Slayers of Daemons”
Knight Aduro Varltusk
Purifier Trucido Malcil
Purifier Morsus Risdrae
Purifier Interimo Achon
Purifier Perdo Palatrian

Puritas Titan
“Purity of Titan”
Knight Ustilo Denves
Purifier Judex Lamiel
Purifier Marius Filarn
Purifier Letum Asildo
Purifier Gratian Jemor

Veritatis Reclaimer
“Reclaimers of Truth”
Knight Suadeo Metaxas
Purifier Suadeo Metaxas
Purifier Exuro Aughine
Purifier Durand Farrion
Purifier Defaeco Gerves

Decemuirum Egestas Bibendum
“Keepers of the Vault”
Knight Accursius Leusk
Purifier Acuzio Llysltrad
Purifier Exitium Adlther
Purifier Validus Ardwash
Purifier Ignatius Melndhon

Motor Pool
Razorback Amdis - Ferox Lamiril
Razorback Solita - Aleron Stozck
Razorback Ardere - Celeritas Tatius
Razorback Ireta - Ezio Martialis
Razorback Galena - Remus Demetriou
Dreadnought Caedo
Dreadnought Mortis

The Appearance
The fortress rattled, the doors to the Chambers of Purity had been closed for what felt like days. There was something big happening inside. The supreme grand master stood outside of the door with a contingent of paladins looking over his shoulder, their storm bolters fixed on the door, their Nemesis weapons ready and glowing.
“How could he have gotten past our defenses?” Said one of the Grand Masters looking over to Draigo. “And how is one rouge marine taking so long to be brought down.”
“There is something more here at work...” the Supreme Grand Master had more to say but the servitor approaching need not hear what he was going to say. “You have news?”
“It is the Dark Angels, they have a transport requesting access...” The servitor said in a deadpan.
“Absolutely not, have one of our Thunderhawks greet them with a full...” His face stern and agitated by waiting for this ordeal with the Chambers of Purity to be finished.
“They say they know who is in there and they want to help.” The servitor continues with it's emotionless speech.

Crowe's Fall
The purifiers continued to go through the halls. They had broken into small squads, this was not the daemons they were use to fighting, it was a man, a space marine. His black power armor and bone colored robes. But some how he would appear fire a few shots with bolt pistol and plasma pistol and then disappear. Something was awaking the stuff contained here. Some of the items that were under their careful watch, the daemon possessing it would release the item and materialize. Purifiers had little problems with vanquishing these demons, even binding a few. Cowe having noticed a trend in which daemon activity occurred when isolates his most trusted purifiers to 2 hallways and sits and waits in the intersection, sure enough the robed figure drops from the ceiling. A plasma shot glances off the shoulder of one of the purifiers as boltgun fire embeds its self in the shaft of another Nemesis force weapon. This was all the time Crowe needed he raises the Daemonic blade he carries head on into the robed figure. Unable to turn and fire fast enough the hooded figure reaches for the sword across his back, but before he can fully unsheathe it Crowe is upon him. There is little he can try to do but to block the attack. As the Blade of Antwyr meets the unsheathed metal of the space marines blade, there is a vortex created, both Crowe and the stranger vanish, all that remains is the Blade of Antwyr. The 10 purifiers look down to it. Magnus Manlius, the purifier who had blocked the boltgun fire with his Nemesis Force halberd drops his crippled weapon and picks up the sword.
“Clean this up, Make sure nothing else if free, the Supreme Grand Master will want to hear of this. Lets get these doors open.” Magnus says as his power armor clinks heading down the hall.