Taking the Ruins- A story about the invasion of the Stardust Empire

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**Inquisitor Ehrenstein**

This is mostly really a battle report in a lot of ways, with fluff added it it. I will probably need to make it a little more 3D to make it more interesting; it's sort of like a history article or something right now.

Here's the story:

http://en.sturmkrieg.com/Taking_the_Ruins

Be sure to include any thought, thanks.

**purplefood**

Needs a lot of improvement...

**Blacksails**

The fluff still doesn't make sense, what with this alleged 'Dark Emperor' person throwing fits and all.

Also, it was a small town and the battle involved a platoon of tanks and support, plus maybe a three squads of marines...hardly a significant battle in the outcome of a war that I can only assume spans entire sectors.

**purplefood**

Blacksails wrote:The fluff still doesn't make sense, what with this alleged 'Dark Emperor' person throwing fits and all.

Also, it was a small town and the battle involved a platoon of tanks and support, plus maybe a three squads of marines...hardly a significant battle in the outcome of a war that I can only assume spans entire sectors.

I assumed it was a seperate/alternate reality that was loosely based on 40k...

**shadowsnip**

I liked it. But I want to see DEATH i want to see EMOTION

"This is Star Dust squad alpha! We've sighted the demolisher! ITS ADVANCING!!! FIRE THE LASCANNON!"

BOOOOOM

Sheise like that I want to be there i want to feel the blood and the death! Make the battle report from someones perspective!

"HA! Those meesly star dust marines are NO MATCH FOR CHAOS!!! And THE STAR RATS!!!"

But i really got a good laugh out of the dark emperor. I just pictured him in a meeting drinking coffee then some guy comes up and says "we got owned sorry chief" lol i mean that in a good way.