Seems pretty solid on the whole.
Smite is a bad power, go for the avenger instead, it will almost always do more damage.
I personally prefer all hammer/shield terminators but your mix is pretty good.
As you are not using the extra capacity for the LR crusader, I would go for a normal one instead as you already have a decent amount of anti-infantry with the predators, and Tl lascannon are never bad.
dreadnoughts and predators are always good options with those load outs so no problems there.
Are you combat squadding the tactical marines? if so then that combination works, if not multi-meltas would work better as a mobile anti-tank platform.
So a pretty solid list really, and no major issues that I can see. (A lot of my suggestions are tweaks and personal preference).
Hope this is useful.
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