Here's some random Guard fic if anyone is interested. I'm working on the second draft of the next bit and it should be up by the weekend or early next week, as long as swtor dosen't distract me too much. I hope you enjoy and be vocal with any comments or criticism you have! It means alot
"Six forty-seventh!" the amplified voice of Captain Maithonis reverberated off the massive loading docks, "Fall in!" Captain Maithonis and his Regimental Staff stood on a raised platform which overlooked the entire shipping and receiving dock of Mid-Sector, Hive Feylintis. At his command, a crescendo of over fifteen thousand Shock Troops of the Cadian 647th Infantry Regiment raced down the ramps of their troop carrier ships. The troopers were clad in snow-pattern fatigues and matching flak armour and their slung lasguns had been re-patterned to match with their environment.
The Regiment began to form up: first with the individual squads centering on their proper platoon standards, next the platoons rallied around their respected company standards, and finally the companies centering in front of the platform where the Regimental Staff waited. The deep blue and blood red of the six forty-seven's Regimental Standard, blew too and fro in the light snow storm. Its border of embroidered gold shone valiantly in the murky outside light, a gilded beacon flying proud in Hive Feylintis' stark whites and greys.
Below, in the orchestrated chaos of bodies, the Commissars were on the prowl. An eight month transit through the warp could turn the most precise parade-drilled unit, into a lazy, slobbering mass of dead weight, who's only purpose would be to act as meat shield. The Commissar's vicious barks of, "Any trooper caught jackin' around will be flogged!" or, slightly more motivating, "Any C.O. or N.C.O. found slacking in their duties will be flogged and subject to be shot!" Unfortunately for the sergeant of Third Platoon, B Company, one of the Commissar's had just called him out for the latter.
Sergeant Decimint froze as he heard the snarl of one of the political officers, "You! Get to attention! Now!"
Decimint assumed the position of attention, arms pinned to the sides, back straight, chest out, eyes forward. Junior Commissar Orson's rat-like face entered his vision.
Frakking great, thought Sergeant Decimint as he mentally rolled his eyes.
The Junior Commissar stopped in front of Decimint, looking him up and down in disgust, as he read the sergeant's name tape with his beady black eyes.
"What rank do you hold, Decimint?" snapped Junior Commissar Orson. Decimint felt a spray of saliva splash onto his face.
"Platoon Sergeant, First Grade, sir!" answered Decimint, this time mentally sighing.
The Junior Commissar scrunched his rat-face into a mocking sneer, "Then, explain to me
why you were the last man out of your transport? Here I was thinking you Cadians led from the front." More spit glistened as it landed on the sergeant's face.
Decimint ignored the saliva freezing onto his cheeks, "To ensure all of my men had disembarked and would be accounted for, sir."
"Leaders,
lead, their men, sergeant," spat Orson, clearly ignoring Decimint's response, "Are you telling me that you are incapable of ensuring your orders are followed to the tee?" He sneered triumphantly as he looked Decimint up and down again. His grin widened, showing off teeth as white as the falling snow, "Perhaps," the ratty grin stretching further, "you don't deserve those pins."
"Excuse me, Junior Commissar," a new voice had joined the conversation, rumbling like thunder of a distant storm, "Is everything alright here?"
Decimint nearly broke his bearing as he watched Orson's eyes widen in terror. The Junior Commissar quickly about-faced and froze as he met the soul searing gaze of Senior Commissar Amaranth Nortuen.
"Sergeant Decimint was last out of his troop ship, Senior-sir!" Orson nearly stuttered through the response. The dead grey organic eye and the piercing, ice-blue bionic eye of the Senior Commissar always freaked the piss out of him. He heard rumors that the bionic eye could predict the actions of those it observed. And now, Orson had its full attention.
"Well, this is not good news," Nortuen cast his gaze over to the still sergeant, "Is that how your predecessor taught you to lead?"
"No sir, it is not," Decimint remained impassive, though his body had relaxed by ten-fold.
"Leaders failing to lead should be disciplined Orson, that much you are correct," Nortuen quickly removed his peaked Commissariate cap and gently brushed off the snow flakes that had collected on its bill. He placed the cap back, covering his horrendously scarred head as he continued, "However, you are still new to our regiment and you clearly have not read Sergeant Decimint's personnel file." Nortuen looked the Junior up and down, while Decimint did his very best to keep his bearing.
By now, the entire Third Platoon stood at attention watching the scene play out before them.
Nortuen strode past a reddening Orson and stood before Decimint.
"Sergeant First Grade Ranis Decimint," just hearing his name and rank from the Senior Commissar's voice filled Decimint with uncontainable pride. "Joined the Cadian Six Forty-Seventh in 995.M41 as a common trooper," Nortuen smiled and winked at him before finishing, "A regular footslogger."
Nortuen glanced back at the at the sullen Orson before continuing, "As a trooper, Decimint displayed qualities of a leader and was quickly promoted to Corporal and made N.C.O. of Third Platoon, Company B." Nobody knew how Nortuen memorized every single trooper's personal history. Decimint heard it had to do with the Senior's bionic eye.
"When the Despoiler fell upon Cadia, Corporal Decimint kept his platoon under control when Sergeant Proeau was killed, during a vicious World Eater assault." Nortuen paused and smirked at Orson, "Have you ever met the Traitor Legions on the field of battle, Junior?"
Orson still fixed him with that frozen glare.
"Of course you haven't," Senior Commissar Nortuen stated, "When Sergeant Proeau fell, Decimint did exactly what was expected of him. He took charge and made the order to fall back, which brought the World Eaters into the jaws of our heavy bolter teams." Nortuen brought his attention back to Decimint. Third Platoon listened intently.
"You even went back and retrieved the bodies of those slain in the assault," smiled Nortuen, proudly.
"Sir, you taught me to: 'Never leave a man behind, regardless of who they are.'"
"You see Orson," the Senior slowly brought his gaze back to the immobile Junior Commissar, "If you had read the sergeant's personnel file, you would've known why he was last out." The conversation should have ended any further debate right there with Nortuen's statement.
But it didn't. Orson felt his pride wounded and it betrayed him.
"But.." he began.
Nortuen had been anticipating his slip up.
"I suggest you square yourself away before you decide to go spouting off, telling others how to perform their duties," Nortuen's voice an angry growl. "Sergeant Decimint was doing what any leader with a fraking idea of command would do!"
Third Platoon flinched. You knew it was bad when the Senior swore. Life-threatening bad.
Nortuen continued, "To ensure all his men had disembarked the transport and none were AWOL, he was showing initiative! If Sergeant Decimint took accountability and found there to be troopers missing? not only would those men be shot, the sergeant would find himself in a bigger pile of gak than Armageddon!"
Third Platoon cringed yet again and Orson had gone as white as his teeth.
"Now that you have wasted Sergeant Decimint and Third Platoon's time, I present two options with which to redeem yourself. First: you can shake the good sergeant's hand and give him an appropriate apology," Orson looked like he was going to be sick. "Second: as head disciplinarian of the six forty-seven, I can have you flogged in front of the entire regiment by Commissar DeMarco for failing in your duty as a Commissar, to know
every trooper in the six forty-seven."
Junior Commissar Orson wanted to cry. He just wanted to curl up in the foetal position and bawl his eyes out. He couldn't. The thought of apologizing to a fragging footslogger, even if it had rank, made Orson's skin crawl. He prided himself on being strict and Nortuen had used it against him. Anger began to well up inside his gut. He would prefer to be flogged over touching a disgusting hand of a footslogger. Even if it had rank.
Orson realized that he had no other option, if he took the flogging his career as a Commissar would surely be over. That bastard Nortuen was forcing him to either swallow his pride, or loose twenty two years of training. He realized then, that the decision had already been made by Nortuen's play.
He took a deep breath and hesitantly stepped up to Sergeant Decimint. "Sergeant, I would like to apologize for my actions," the words slipping through his clenched teeth, "I was wrong to accuse you as a...a slacker and Senior Commissar Nortuen has...enlightened me." Orson slowly brought up his hand.
In a flash, Sergeant Decimint held Orson's hand in a vice grip. Orson nearly cried out in revulsion.
"Apology accepted, Junior Commissar," the Sergeant's grip nearly shattered Orson's hand.
"Now then," breathed Nortuen, a fatherly smile on his lips, "Return to your duties, Orson, and be mindful of them. Dismissed."
The Junior Commissar made a hasty salute before sulking down the line, defeated. Nortuen eyed him until he was out of sight, before turning back to Decimint and his platoon.
"Laugh it out, Third Platoon," Nortuen sighed, humorlessly.
Sighs of relief and roars of laughter responded to his order. Some of the troopers were clutching their stomachs in pain as they nearly laughed themselves to death. One man actually fell into the snow, causing members of B Company's Fourth Platoon, to look over in confusion.
"Emperor bless your soul, Senior Commissar!" belted Imen Hawke, Second Squad's grenadier.
"Just doing my job, Trooper Hawke," Nortuen shouted over the heads of Third Platoon.
"With all due respect sir, the Junior's an ass," spat a laughing Decimint.
He suddenly felt the gaze-glare of the Senior Commissar as he realized he spoke out of turn.
"Saying, 'with all due respect,' can still earn you a face full of plasma, Sergeant," Nortuen patted an ancient, holstered plasma pistol hidden in his storm coat, "The term is not a void shield."
Decimint nodded apologetically, "Sorry sir, the Junior he's a...well, he's an..." Decimint was lost for words.
"An
interesting man!" piped the ever enthusiastic, Grenadier Hawke.
"Yes, the Junior
is and
interesting man," agreed Decimint.
Nortuen smiled as warmly as a man could with half of an organic face, "He is of different blood. Like a newbown pup, he'll quickly learn how we Cadians do things." Third Platoon let out a round of cheers, while Nortuen tried to locate Grenadier Hawke.
"Hawke!" he called out as his search proved futile, "Keep thinking quick like that, and you'll have your own squad one day!"
A blast of laughter rose from the rear of the platoon.
"Not to sound like a mutinous heretic sir," Hawke shouted back, "But I've got my sights set on Regiment Commander!" There was more laughter as Nortuen felt an amused smile steal across his face.
Hawke continued with his master plan, "Then it will be Colonel Hawke the Fearless and the legendary Commissar Nortuen, dishing out all frakking hell upon the enemies of the Emperor!" Nortuen noticed he was apart of the laughing chorus of Third Platoon. "We'll fight side by side and be remembered in the Imperial Annals as heroes!"
Now troopers from both Second and Fourth Platoons began sniggering as they listened in on Grenadier Hawke's 'future career.' That was a joke all in itself.
"And I look forward to the day, when Colonel Hawke the Fearless plants our six forty-seven's standard, into the corpse of the Despoiler!" roared Nortuen.
By now those who had been listening, found tears pouring down their faces as they visioned the Senior Commissar's depiction of the clumsy Hawke slaying the Warmaster of Chaos. Nortuen allowed them fifteen more seconds of joy before he had to return to his role as Senior Commissar.
"Alright Sergeant. Shut them up," at Nortuen's command, Decimint went back to attention. Any hint of the previous hysterics gone.
"Yes sir, Senior Commissar!" barked the newly rejuvenated Decimint.
Nortuen marched off to inspect the rest of B Company, as the laughs were replaced with discipline and order. Happy moments were their own miracles within the Imperial Guard and now that miracle was gone, replaced by grim thoughts and a dark future.