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Made in gb
Contagious Dreadnought of Nurgle





Oxfordshire UK

Hi Dakka!

I just wondered if any one of you guys and gals had come upon this before? It's strange when you hear a song that you truly love, then read the lyrics minus the music. In my mind, it's a pretty tough thing too do, to write a song that would be just as good as a poem if you were to present it as such. I'm not really sure I can articulate myself properly, so I'll just post an example of what I'm trying to say!

I'll spoiler it, cos it's quite a wall of text!

Spoiler:
On promenades where drunks propose to lonely arcade mannequins
Where ceremonies pause at the jeweler's shop display
Feigning casual silence in strained romantic interludes
Till they commit themselves to the muted journey home

And the pool player rests on another cue
Last nights hero picking up his dues
A honeymoon gambled on a ricochet
She's staring at the brochures at the holidays

Chalking up a name in your hometown
Standing all your mates to another round
Laughing at the world till the barman wipes away the warm wet circles
The warm wet circles

I saw teenage girls like gaudy moths
A classroom's shabby butterflies
Flirt in the glow of stranded telephone boxes
Planning white lace weddings from smeared hearts and token proclamations
Rolled from stolen lipsticks across the razored webs of glass
Sharing cigarettes with experience with her giggling jealous confidantes
She faithfully traces his name with quick bitten fingernails
Through the tears of condensation that'll cry through the night
As the glancing headlights of the last bus kiss adolescence goodbye
In a warm wet circle

Like a mothers kiss on your first broken heart, a warm wet circle
Like a bullet hole in Central Park, a warm wet circle
And I'll always surrender to the warm wet circles

She nervously undressed in the dancing beams of the Fidra lighthouse
Giving it all away before it's too late
She'll let a lovers tongue move in a warm wet circle
Giving it all away and showing no shame
She'll take a mother's kiss on her first broken heart a warm wet circle
She'll realise that she played her part in a warm wet circle

It was a wedding ring
Destined to be found in a cheap hotel
Lost in a kitchen sink or thrown in the well


That was the brilliant Marillion, with Warm Wet Circles.. Do any of you get what I'm trying too say? I guess a top top lyricist should be a poet first and a singer/song writer second!
There are only a few top song writers i can think of off hand. Derick Dick (Fish), Jim Morrison, and at a push Otis Redding. Any one have anything to add too this slight rambling of mine?


 
   
Made in us
Kid_Kyoto






Probably work

Check out the Decemberists, specifically The Hazards of Love or The Crane Wife.

They do a pretty good job of capturing poetry in song.


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Made in gb
Executing Exarch






Ayrshire, Scotland

Hope to See by Drever, McCusker, Woomble

Spoiler:
Your face expresses its years so seriously
as the lamp light draws dark circles round your eyes
and your mouth twists, unexpected fate, into its natural shape
and turns the dark into another form of light.

Time expresses itself so suddenly
and people pass like strangers in the night.
They're just doing what they think is right on into an older way of life
where the dark is just another form of light.

Every single thing I ever hoped to see
I held in my hands
in the hope I'd never turn into the man
I'm expected to be
and what you hold in your hands
as lost to memory…

Dry your eyes and round circles
'cause you've been pulled into the ocean
on an undertow of all our lonely hearts.
But solitude feels the same
whoever you blame.
Don't let darkness become another form of light.

Every single thing I ever hoped to see
I held in my hands
in the hope I'd never turn into the man
I'm expected to be
Now I know that nothing is lost to memory


Here's a video, the music is good, not sure what's happening with the pictures!




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