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lord
Master necro
nightsroud, rode of flaming death, abyssal terror + poison tail

heroes
2x tomb banshee
necro level 1
vampire level 2 + sword of strife, aura of dark majesty

core
40 zombies + command
40 zombies + command
20 skeletons + command
20 skeletons + command

special
5 hexwraiths
20 grave guard + banner of the barrow
2 corps cart + bale fire.

sorry for some spelling mistake, french canadian guy. not good for writing in english.

I feel that there is not a whole lot of "punching" power from this list

Master Necros should never be out on their lonesome and looking for combat, I would not bother giving him an abyssal terror.

For having a magic sword, the vampire looks a bit naked, does he have any armor?

Zombies dont need standards, just musicians

No one has master of the dead, thus I do not think x20 skeletons would be efficient to hold up against most units

Might need more grave guard to have an effective hammer (30 is usually good)

x2 corps carts seems overkill, maybe thats just me

As Kenshin said, the Master Necro should not be out on his own. Also, he could use a ward save, I'd drop the Nightshroud and get the Talisman of Preservation.
Why the lvl 1 Necro? From what I see, he doesn't add much to your army...
And you don't need the Full Command on every unit... Zombies only a musician as said, and IMO skellies at that unit size only need more skellies, not a command. They need either Master of the Dead on your general, or bigger unit size.
I assume Grave Guards are your hammer, but... Without Great Weapons, they're more all-around. If you want them as your hammer, you'll need great weapons.

2 corpse carts is probably overkill, 2 balefire definitely is considering it doesnt stack.
Id drop the abyssal terror and use the units of skeletons as bunkers for your casters. also if you want your vampire in combat you should leave it as a lvl one caster and make your necromancer lvl 2. the points from the terror could be used to give grave guard great weapons and/or add another hammer, such as black knights.
also, imo, no list for a match above 1500 points should be without a dispell scroll, but thats really just a matter of opinion.