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This is my 5000 point chaos dwarf army list. Any comments are welcome but constructive criticism is preferred to those that just like being a arse hole.


------------------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Arch Prophet of Hashut 3 5 4 6 5 3 2 3 10 2+ 420 points
Lord Khaa-Rhyz (4+)

Black Hammer of Hashut
The Enchanted Shield
Talisman of Preservation
The Channeling Staff
Blackshard Armour
Level 4 - Hashut Lore
The Blood of Hashut
Infernal Engineer
Sorcerer's Curse
Daemonsmith
Relentless
Resolute
Immune to Psychology
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------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
The Soulsmith 3 5 4 4 5 3 2 3 10 3+ 400 points
Tha-Bakh (4+)

Mask of the Furnace
The Obsidian Amulet
The Darkforged Blade
Magic Resistance (2)
Ironcurse Icon
Blackshard Armour
Level 4 - Death Lore
Infernal Engineer
Sorcerer's Curse
Daemonsmith
Immune to Psychology
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------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
The Forgelord 3 5 4 7 5 3 2 3 10 3+ 400 points
Zhuu-Khaa (5+)

The Giant Blade
The Dragonhelm
Talisman of Endurance
Blackshard Armour
Level 4 - Metal lore
Infernal Engineer
Sorcerer's Curse
Daemonsmith
Immune to Psychology
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------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Battle Stanbdard 3 6 4 4 5 2 3 3 9 4+ 190 points
Rha-Khorth *5

The Razor Standard
Armour Piercing
Blackshard Armour
Fireglaive*
Stubborn
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------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Castellan 3 6 4 4 6 2 3 3 9 3+ 125 points
Zel-Azad *5

Darkforged Armour
Fireglaive*
Stubborn
Shield
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------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Ironbull 3 5 3 4 4 1 2 2 9 3+
*5 *(6+)

------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
24 Ironsworn 3 5 3 4 4 1 2 1 9 3+ 450 points
*5 *(6+)
Blackshard Armour
Shields
Enscorcelled Weapons
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------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Castellan 3 6 4 4 5 2 3 3 9 3+ 130 points
Fhar-Nhak

The Spellshield
Magic Resistance (1)
Blackshard Armour
Pistol
Stubborn
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------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Deathmask 3 5 3 4 4 1 2 2 9 4+
*5 3+

-----------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
34 Infernal Guard 3 4 3 4 4 1 2 1 9 4+ 627 points
*5 3+

Fireglaives*
Blackshard Armour
Shields
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Castellan 3 6 4 4 5 2 3 3 9 3+ 127 points
Khar-Zyth

The Obsidian Trinket
Magic Resistance (1)
Blackshard Armour
Shield
Pistol
Stubborn
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Deathmask 3 5 3 4 4 1 2 2 9 4+
*5 3+

-------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
34 Infernal Guard 3 4 3 4 4 1 2 1 9 4+ 627 points
*5 3+

Fireglaives*
Blackshard Armour
Shields
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************


------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Iron Daemon 6 8 8 8 3+ 340 points
Skullcracker *1 *2D6


------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Crewmen 4 3 3 2 3 9 3+

Ironhide
Unbreakable
Terror
Hellbound
Large Target
Impact Hits (2D6+2)
Thunderstomp!*
Lumbering and Unstoppable
Demolition
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************


------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Iron Daemon 6 8 8 8 3+ 340 points
Skullcracker *1 *2D6


------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Crewmen 4 3 3 2 3 9 3+

Ironhide
Unbreakable
Terror
Hellbound
Large Target
Impact Hits (2D6+2)
Thunderstomp!*
Lumbering and Unstoppable
Demolition
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

-----------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save 145 points

Magma Cannon 7 3

---------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
3 Crewmen 3 4 3 3 4 1 2 1 9 5+


Magma Burst
Heavy Armour
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----------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save 145 points

Magma Cannon 7 3

---------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
3 Crewmen 3 4 3 3 4 1 2 1 9 5+


Magma Burst
Heavy Armour
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

----------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save 100 points

Deathshrieker 8 4

----------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
3 Crewmen 3 4 3 3 4 1 2 1 9 5+


Rocket Battery
Heavy Armour
Infernal Incendiaries
Demolition Rocket
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

----------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save 100 points

Deathshrieker 8 4

----------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
3 Crewmen 3 4 3 3 4 1 2 1 9 5+


Rocket Battery
Heavy Armour
Infernal Incendiaries
Demolition Rocket
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save 130 points

Firelord of Zharr 3 4 4 5 4 2 2 2 9 4+
Azak-Zhar


Blackshard Armour
Enscorcelled Weapon
Level 2 - Fire Lore
Daemonsmith
Sorcerer's Curse
Infernal Engineer
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

----------------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save 215 points

Dreadquake Mortar 7 6

-------------------M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
3 Crewmen 3 4 3 3 4 1 2 1 9 5+

M WS BS S T W I A LD Save
Ogre Gunslave 6 3 2 4 4 3 2 3 7
*1 *1

Multiple Wounds (D6)
Armour Piercing
Quake
Hellbound
Unstable Shells
Heavy Armour
Stomp*
***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

. Your format is very hard to read, try dropping all the special rules, and stats from the list.

5000 points is hard to give advice for as you can take everything.

Drop 1-2 of the lv.4's, as you don't need 12 levels of magic. If you keep one lv.4, pick up a few demon smiths to sit with the war machines. The demon smith's fireball spell should be a decent deterrent for most war machine hunting units.
Get a k'aai destroyer. This thing can wreck most of an opposing army by its self.
On second though; get 2.
I think you have only 3 ranked units (again; it's very hard to tell with your current formatting). You're going to need a lot more in order to win a 5k game. Pick up some hobgoblin slaves. 3-4 units of 50ish would be good. I know they are expensive, but the stall the will provide to your gunline will be worth it.
Iron demons are sweet, but watch out for cav and monsters. The iron demon only gets extra impact hits, and stomp attacks.
If you can fit them in; bull centaurs would be a nice addition to your list. They will be fast enough to hunt war machines, if taken in small units, and they hit hard enough in CC to take on opposing support units

That's a serious headache to read