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Your Necro Lord can't have both the Talisman of Preservation and Seed of Rebirth. Max one magic item per type, per character. (in other words, each character can carry one magic weapon, one talisman, one arcane item, and so on). I'd suggest you just drop the Seed, the Talisman is good enough.
I assume you gave the Hero Vamp the Aura to maximize the use of the Screaming Banner, right? Wouldn't Fear Incarnate be a good addition to that? Other than that, he seems kitted fine.
I'd suggest giving the Grave Guard great weapons. It increases the killing capacity very drastically.
Also, since you gave your Master Necro Master of the Dead, I'd really suggest having at least one more unit of skeletons.
This is just a personal preference, but I'd drop the Banshee for this point level, and perhaps drop one unit of Wolves, in order to fit in more skeletons. Because in order to get the most out of Master of the Dead, you need more units around the Necro.
Oh, and a little note: The command on the skeleton unit is not cheap. I almost never use a Musician and only use a champion if there's another character in the unit. The Standard Bearer is good however.
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