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Made in au
Crazed Spirit of the Defiler




Eye of Terror

Urgent Transmission Received...
Inquisitor code: 29HG-SA
Inquisitor Harkas of the Ordo hereticus

This is Inquisitor Harkas, I was sent the Carlas sector a decade ago in response the the disappearance of Inquistor Hyjai sent to combat a growing threat of a mysterious chaos warband that was waging in the area.
By the time i had reached the sector i encountered the fierce chaos war-band as soon as i entered the sector for ten years i have battled them relentlessly and have gained enough information to include a full report based on a recording i found a Hjais last location and my experiences with them...you are not gonna to like what you hear but this is the truth all my acolytes and retinue are dead and i am running out of guardsmen....i need reinforcements or this entire sector will be lost, playing the recording now...

Record starting:

*sounds of swords clashing, bolters going and warpfire finally ending with a strong thud*

Other-worldly voice: PATHETIC, I WOULD OF THOUGHT INQUISITORS PROVIDED MORE OF A CHALLENGE

inquisitor Hjai: *stringed coughing* you have not won yet...daemon!!!

Other-worldly voice:AHH BUT YOU LEGS ARE CRIPPLED,YOUR SWORD IS BROKEN AND THOSE PUNY BOLTER ROUNDS WONT EVEN TICKLE ME

inquisitor HjaI: EMPORER SMITE YOU DAEMON YOU WILL ALL FALL AGAINST THE MIGHT OF THE IMPERIUM

Other-worldly voice:HAHAHAHA LITTLE INQUISITOR I DO INDEED SERVE THE EMPORER!, I SENSE YOUR CONFUSION BEFORE YOU DIE I WILL REVEAL TO YOU WHO WE TRULY ARE WE SERVE THE DARK EMPORER OF MANKIND MASTER OF TIME AND MATTER WE COME HERE TO BRING THE GALAXY UNDER THE GLORIOUS SWAY OF CHAOS JUST AS WE DID TO MANY OTHERS!!! FOR I AM CALGAR DAEMON PRINCE OF CHAOS!!!

another voice:My lord finish her quickly there is much to be done, if we are to setup a foothold to bring the others to conquer this pathetic galaxy

Calgar: SILENCE! I GIVE THE ORDERS HERE I WILL NOT GRANT HER A QUICK DEATH, NOW INQUISITOR PREPARE TO MEET YOUR TRUE EMPORER!!!

*unearthly scrams and gargles occur from the inquisitor before falling silent*

Recording ends.

This shocked me to the core if this is indeed tru i will need EVERY possible from of reinforcements to battle this threat so far i have prevented them from making a foothold but i am running out of men and resources, in desperation i am forced to unite all the civilian populace as the well as the various xenos species in the sector under the banner of survival, reinforcements are needed urgently DO NOT DELAY!

Below is a brief report on this warband gained from battlefield experience and interrogations of captured warriors.

Name: The Dark Ultras Formally the ultramarines
Battle Cry: For the Dark Emporer!!!, for Gulliman, For chaos!!
Number: 130+ marine forces,1 million cultists
Tacitcs: mixed, though fortunately the cultists are too insane for any tactics they just simply run to us to be shot down
Threat level: Extermitus maximus!
appearance: bright blue armor with gold trim
Specialty: daemonic summoning, mass infantry charges
Ships: 12 battle barges so far
Vehicles:2 land raiders,12 rhinos and 2 predators
Status: bogged down in heavy attrition war in the sector against 300 imperial guard regiments and inquisitional retinue, Sister of battle of the sacred rose on their way to reinforce the sector, several tomb worlds awakening and hive fleets spotted near the sector

Interview transcript from a captured, tutored and then executed warrior
"you think you have won puny inquisitor? we are merely a scouting force and once we have opened the grand portal OUR NUMBERS WILL BLOT OUT THE LIGHT OF THIS GALAXY! so go ahead torture and kill me i have died a 1000 times and i will live a 1000 more times as long as the dark emporer is with me, even horus could not stop the dark emporer from achieving godhood and i have fought in many alternate dimensions some where all of the legions stayed loyal, others had a different arch traitor other than the weakling horus, and one where the golden age of humanity never stopped WE TRIUMPHED OVER THEM ALL, killing me will do nothing you might as well give up....muhahahahahaha"

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This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2012/04/22 08:33:06


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Made in ca
Lord of the Fleet






Halifornia, Nova Scotia

I truthfully don't know if this is serious or not...

Thirty thousand marines? A hundred and thirty battle barges?

No.

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Made in au
Crazed Spirit of the Defiler




Eye of Terror

I say yes, and here is why

1. They come from alternate nightmare dimension where the emporer turned to chaos, defeated the loyalist who opposed choas and became the fifth chaos god known as the dark emporer.

2. The dark Emporer decreeded that all existance should fall under chaos so chaos legions travel through to different dimensions or timelines to do the dark emporers will

3. The numbers are not absurd pre heresy legions,had 10,000 or more space marines, and these guys are based of the ultra marines one of the largest legions

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Lord of the Fleet






Halifornia, Nova Scotia

I...don't know where to begin. Alternate nightmare dimension? Dark Emperor? Fifth chaos god? Travelling accross dimensions?

None of this follows any 40k canon, and is very mary sue-ish with an absurdly huge, awesome, dimension conquering 'chapter'. It just comes across as being very silly.

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Made in au
Crazed Spirit of the Defiler




Eye of Terror

Alternate nightmare dimension?
Yes i was thinking of basing this from an alternate dimension where the emporer turns to chaos and assended to godhood and is now known as the dark emporer aka the 5th chaos god and basicially makes the whole galxy his nightmare realm aka as a chaos realm

Travelling accross dimensions?
Yes this is possible with chaos belive it or not, chaos followers who have enough favour with their god or daemon princes will sometimes go on to new dimensions to fight for their patron

But for the sake of being too overpowered i have toned down the numbers besides its just fiction its not gonna kill anyone or is it?.............to be continued

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2012/04/22 08:36:04


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Made in gb
Fixture of Dakka






Dorset, Southern England



Chaotic Ultramarines... What?

What?

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Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

You could at least spell Emperor correctly...
It's clear you aren't going to try to adhere to established cannon so there isn't much point with anyone criticizing it on that basis...

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Made in ca
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Halifornia, Nova Scotia

purplefood wrote:
It's clear you aren't going to try to adhere to established cannon so there isn't much point with anyone criticizing it on that basis...


True, but its still just such an awkward twist on canon, that it only sounds incredibly silly. Besides that, basic spelling, capitalizing, and avoiding run-on sentences will go a long way.

I still think its a poor idea, one that I can't take seriously in any way shape or form.

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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Blacksails wrote:
purplefood wrote:
It's clear you aren't going to try to adhere to established cannon so there isn't much point with anyone criticizing it on that basis...


True, but its still just such an awkward twist on canon, that it only sounds incredibly silly. Besides that, basic spelling, capitalizing, and avoiding run-on sentences will go a long way.

I still think its a poor idea, one that I can't take seriously in any way shape or form.

Oh yeah definitely...
Alternate universes have been a bad idea for ages...

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