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Here is the first ungor raider done for my Beastmen commission http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/436103.page.

C&C very much welcome!

It's so good, but the gap on the right arm socket is killing me!

Could you fix it to make your model even more amazing than it already is?

There's something really off-looking about that right arm... But I can't put my finger on it.

Also the base really could use a tidy up and a spot of static grass or something to break it up and make it stand away from the brown of the model. Brown + Brown? Hrm.

Also what's with that red/brown blob on his left hand? Is that an ink pool?

I'm not trying to be TFG, but I think we all know that peoples doing Commissions that post their work here do get a harder and more critical assessment.

The red part on his left hand was Dark Flesh from doing the bow which needs to be tidied up.

As for the right arm, it isn't very noticeable in person. The ungor bow arms all fit weirdly so it's hard to get them to look completely smooth and natural without adding GS.