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Made in rs
Resolute Ultramarine Honor Guard





Holy Terra

The 1'st part called "Memories":

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7734626/1/Memories

The 2'nd part called "The Angels of Death":

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7883349/1/The_Angels_of_Death

I am currently working on a 3'rd part of the story witch will focus on a major battle for forge world including Orks, Black Templars and Cadians ( I know, "Space Marine" ripoff in a way... ).
My grammar is not so great so a little understanding would be appreciated.

I think that 100% of you here know what Warhammer 40.000 is and it's major players ( Imperial Guard, Space Marines, Inquisition, Chaos and Orks ). But I don't think that many of you knows what "Claymore" is, here is info about that:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Claymore_(manga)
and if you are interesting in reading it, you can do it here ( I recommend, manga is GREAT ):
http://www.mangahere.com/manga/claymore/

For Emperor and Imperium!!!!
None shall stand against the Crusade of the Righteous!!!
Kanluwen wrote: "I like the Tau. I just don't like people misconstruing things to say that it means that they're somehow a huge galactic threat. They're not. They're a threat to the Imperium of Man like sharks are a threat to the US Army."
"Pain is temporary, honor is forever"
Emperor of Mankind:
"The day I have a sit-down with a pansy elf, magic mushroom, or commie frog is the day I put a bolt shell in my head."
in your name it shall be done"
My YouTube channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/2SSSR2

Viersche wrote:
Abadabadoobaddon wrote:
the Emperor might be the greatest psyker that ever lived, but he doesn't have the specialized training that a Grey Knight has. Also he doesn't have a Grey Knight's unshakable faith in the Emperor.


The Emperor doesn't have a GKs unshakable faith in the Emperor which is....basically himself?

Ronin wrote:

"Brother Coa (and the OP Tadashi) is like, the biggest IoM fanboy I can think of here. It's like he IS from the Imperium, sent back in time and across dimensions."

 
   
Made in ca
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Guelph Ontario

.... An odd pairing, to say the least.

Think of something clever to say. 
   
Made in rs
Resolute Ultramarine Honor Guard





Holy Terra

Arcsquad12 wrote:.... An odd pairing, to say the least.


Not really, Claymores are excellent daemonhunters who can detect a daemon while he is disguised as a Human.
That fact would interest the Inquisition...

For Emperor and Imperium!!!!
None shall stand against the Crusade of the Righteous!!!
Kanluwen wrote: "I like the Tau. I just don't like people misconstruing things to say that it means that they're somehow a huge galactic threat. They're not. They're a threat to the Imperium of Man like sharks are a threat to the US Army."
"Pain is temporary, honor is forever"
Emperor of Mankind:
"The day I have a sit-down with a pansy elf, magic mushroom, or commie frog is the day I put a bolt shell in my head."
in your name it shall be done"
My YouTube channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/2SSSR2

Viersche wrote:
Abadabadoobaddon wrote:
the Emperor might be the greatest psyker that ever lived, but he doesn't have the specialized training that a Grey Knight has. Also he doesn't have a Grey Knight's unshakable faith in the Emperor.


The Emperor doesn't have a GKs unshakable faith in the Emperor which is....basically himself?

Ronin wrote:

"Brother Coa (and the OP Tadashi) is like, the biggest IoM fanboy I can think of here. It's like he IS from the Imperium, sent back in time and across dimensions."

 
   
Made in ca
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Guelph Ontario

Brother Coa wrote:
Arcsquad12 wrote:.... An odd pairing, to say the least.


Not really, Claymores are excellent daemonhunters who can detect a daemon while he is disguised as a Human.
That fact would interest the Inquisition...


I'm more interested in the clash of visuals. And if I'm remembering correctly, isn't the entire demon slaying thing just a racket to extort the locals? Or am I mixing up my demon slaying anime? Because if it's true, then the Inquisition would have more than a passing interest.

Think of something clever to say. 
   
Made in au
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Brisbane, Australia

Arcsquad12 wrote:
I'm more interested in the clash of visuals. And if I'm remembering correctly, isn't the entire demon slaying thing just a racket to extort the locals? Or am I mixing up my demon slaying anime? Because if it's true, then the Inquisition would have more than a passing interest.


It is, though the Claymores themselves were not initially aware of that. You can be rest assured that the Inquisition would destroy the organization, but a radical inquisitor might not have qualms with the methods behind the creation of the claymores.

When I have time I might give this interesting piece a looksie.

sebster wrote:
Orlanth wrote:Its a known fact that Aussies are genetically disposed towards crime, we intentionally set them up that way.

But only awesome crimes like bushranging and, if I understand the song correctly, sheep stealing and suicide.
 
   
Made in rs
Resolute Ultramarine Honor Guard





Holy Terra

Thank you all for your replies.
More is on the way...soon I will upload Chapter 2.

For Emperor and Imperium!!!!
None shall stand against the Crusade of the Righteous!!!
Kanluwen wrote: "I like the Tau. I just don't like people misconstruing things to say that it means that they're somehow a huge galactic threat. They're not. They're a threat to the Imperium of Man like sharks are a threat to the US Army."
"Pain is temporary, honor is forever"
Emperor of Mankind:
"The day I have a sit-down with a pansy elf, magic mushroom, or commie frog is the day I put a bolt shell in my head."
in your name it shall be done"
My YouTube channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/2SSSR2

Viersche wrote:
Abadabadoobaddon wrote:
the Emperor might be the greatest psyker that ever lived, but he doesn't have the specialized training that a Grey Knight has. Also he doesn't have a Grey Knight's unshakable faith in the Emperor.


The Emperor doesn't have a GKs unshakable faith in the Emperor which is....basically himself?

Ronin wrote:

"Brother Coa (and the OP Tadashi) is like, the biggest IoM fanboy I can think of here. It's like he IS from the Imperium, sent back in time and across dimensions."

 
   
Made in ph
Ancient Venerable Dreadnought





Thousand Sons Battleship wandering the galaxy...

Hazardous Harry wrote:

It is, though the Claymores themselves were not initially aware of that. You can be rest assured that the Inquisition would destroy the organization, but a radical inquisitor might not have qualms with the methods behind the creation of the claymores.


While I like this story, that is a good point. I'm pretty sure Claymores would get lumped in by puritans, well, maybe not all puritans, considering that Exorcists are possessed by lesser daemons during the final stages of their creation, but by mono-dominants alongside daemonhosts.

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I should have left him there. He had served his purpose. He owed me nothing - yet he gave himself to me willingly. Why? I know not. He is nothing more than a pathetic human. An inferior race. A mon-keigh. But still I broke off my wings so that I might carry him easier. I took him from that place, into the snowstorm where our tracks will not be found. He is heavy. And he is dying. And he is slowing me down. But I will save him. Why? I know not. He is still warm. I can feel his blood ebbing across me. For every beat of his heart, another, slight spill of heat. The heat blows away on the winter wind. His blood is still warm. But fading. And I have spilled scarlet myself. The snow laps greedily at our footsteps and our lifeblood, covering them without a trace as we fade away.

'She sat on the corner, gulping the soup down, uncaring of the heat of it. They had grown more watery as of late she noted, but she wasn't about to beggar food from the Imperials or the "Bearers of the Word." Tau, despite their faults at least didn't have a kill policy for her race.' 
   
Made in au
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Brisbane, Australia

Tadashi wrote:
Hazardous Harry wrote:

It is, though the Claymores themselves were not initially aware of that. You can be rest assured that the Inquisition would destroy the organization, but a radical inquisitor might not have qualms with the methods behind the creation of the claymores.


While I like this story, that is a good point. I'm pretty sure Claymores would get lumped in by puritans, well, maybe not all puritans, considering that Exorcists are possessed by lesser daemons during the final stages of their creation, but by mono-dominants alongside daemonhosts.


Are you sure we're talking about the same thing here?


sebster wrote:
Orlanth wrote:Its a known fact that Aussies are genetically disposed towards crime, we intentionally set them up that way.

But only awesome crimes like bushranging and, if I understand the song correctly, sheep stealing and suicide.
 
   
Made in ph
Ancient Venerable Dreadnought





Thousand Sons Battleship wandering the galaxy...

Hazardous Harry wrote:
Tadashi wrote:
Hazardous Harry wrote:

It is, though the Claymores themselves were not initially aware of that. You can be rest assured that the Inquisition would destroy the organization, but a radical inquisitor might not have qualms with the methods behind the creation of the claymores.


While I like this story, that is a good point. I'm pretty sure Claymores would get lumped in by puritans, well, maybe not all puritans, considering that Exorcists are possessed by lesser daemons during the final stages of their creation, but by mono-dominants alongside daemonhosts.


Are you sure we're talking about the same thing here?



My point is, with Claymores being partially daemonic in nature, the mono-dominants might raise hell over them. The only reason why they don't do so over Exorcists (a Chapter of Space Marines) is because the Astartes are not something you mess with unless you have perfect proof that they've gone over the edge.

I should have left him there. He had served his purpose. He owed me nothing - yet he gave himself to me willingly. Why? I know not. He is nothing more than a pathetic human. An inferior race. A mon-keigh. But still I broke off my wings so that I might carry him easier. I took him from that place, into the snowstorm where our tracks will not be found. He is heavy. And he is dying. And he is slowing me down. But I will save him. Why? I know not. He is still warm. I can feel his blood ebbing across me. For every beat of his heart, another, slight spill of heat. The heat blows away on the winter wind. His blood is still warm. But fading. And I have spilled scarlet myself. The snow laps greedily at our footsteps and our lifeblood, covering them without a trace as we fade away.

'She sat on the corner, gulping the soup down, uncaring of the heat of it. They had grown more watery as of late she noted, but she wasn't about to beggar food from the Imperials or the "Bearers of the Word." Tau, despite their faults at least didn't have a kill policy for her race.' 
   
Made in rs
Imperial Recruit in Training





3'rd part of my story: The Sisters of Mercy.
Enjoy:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8226146/3/The_Sisters_of_Mercy

The galaxy is the Emperor's, and anyone or anything who challenges that claim is an enemy who must be destroyed.
" What is the strongest weapon of mankind? The god-machines of the Adeptus Mechanics? No! The Astartes Legions? No! The tank? The lasgun? The fist? No to all! Courage, and courage alone stands above them all!"
"A good soldier obeys without question. A good officer commands without doubt."
"What do I ask of my officers? Merely that they do their duty with fire in their bellies and a prayer on their lips."
"Though our tanks and artillery are mighty, it is the vast ranks of Imperial Guardsmen that shall trample the enemy to dust - let them come."
"Give me a gun, a google-eyed alien to shoot it at, and I’ll die a happy man."
"As the Emperor protects, so must we."
"We're the Death Korps of Krieg, son. Did you think that was just a pretty name? We never retreat. We fight and we die, that's the Krieg way."
"What I cannot crush with words I will crush with the tanks of the Imperial Guard!"
"Your foe is well equipped, well-trained, battle-hardened. He believes his gods are on his side. Let him believe what he will. We have the tanks on ours." 
   
 
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