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40k army lists, click on it and post a topic under a new thread. But I can help here so I might as well just critique here. Warning though, I just got back from a 2 day tournament so my mind could be a bit fried.
OrkzCrazy wrote:Ghazghkull Thraka w/ cybork body, mega armour, big shoota, and a bosspole
Good, don't really need to state random pieces of his wargear though.
OrkzCrazy wrote:Ork Big Mek w/ choppa, slugga, and kustom force field
Good
OrkzCrazy wrote:10 Nobz w/ Choppas and sluggas, and 2 mega nobz with a kombi shoota rocket launcha
10 Nobz w/ Choppas and sluggas, and 2 mega nobz with a kombi shoota rocket launcha
One of these would be troops, as Ghazzy makes 1 troops. Also, how are you getting Meganobz into the Nobz unit? They are a seperate unit altogether, not a sergeant upgrade, never mind 2. Also, don't give them kombi-rokkits, they miss too often, give the standard Nobz power klaws, a Painboy, Cybork Bodies, a Waaagh banner on one of the squads and a few big choppas sprinkled on the top. Also, decrease the size of the squad, I run 2 squads of 10 but that's because I'm strange, they're generally better at 8 as anything more is overkill.
OrkzCrazy wrote:10 lootas
Good
OrkzCrazy wrote:10 boyz w/ sluggas and choppas and 2 nobz w/ power klaws inside a trukk
10 boyz w/ sluggas and choppas and 2 nobz w/ power klaws inside a trukk
10 boyz w/ sluggas and choppas and 2 nobz w/ power klaws inside a trukk
You can only upgrade 1 boy to Nob status, so you're not allowed to have 2.
OrkzCrazy wrote:20 boyz w/ sluggas and 4 boys w/ assault weapons 2 with rocket launchas and 2 with big shootas and 1 nob w/ a power klaw and a slugga
What do you mean by 4 with assault weapons? Do you mean that 4 boyz are getting ranged weapon upgrades, with 2 getting big Shootas and 2 getting rockets? You can't do that. You can only have 1 special weapon for every 10 boyz. Also, go all rockets or all big shootas, so that there is no reduandancy, I'd personally go big shootas.
OrkzCrazy wrote:10 gretchin w/ a runtherd
Ok.
OrkzCrazy wrote:5 warbikes and 1 nob warbike
Give the Nob a Power Klaw and a Bosspole.
OrkzCrazy wrote:3deff koptas
If you're going to take deffkoptas take 2 individuals and give them buzzsaws.
OrkzCrazy wrote:3killa kans
I'd give these rocket launchers, as the killa kans can actually hit things in shooting sometimes.
Hope this is useful.