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OKAY FIRST OFF I AM NOT A VERY GOOD WRITER XD SO PLEASE REFRAIN FROM INSULTING THIS I MAKING THIS FOR FUN SO THIS IS ABOUT A PAGE ENJOY! OR NOT HAHA.

Heaven Set Aflame

Cast out was Alisteor an angel of great power for not murder nor thievery but for his belief in the power of mankind exiled forever from the heavens but he was not alone with him came his order of 12 angels who believed in his views never again to see the spires of what was once his home. Forced to take refuge among mankind they were accepted as beings of godly power by some and Daemons in disguise by other for if these were really the watchers of mankind why had they just now appeared? This is there story of revenge. “Alisteor we’ve been cast out forgotten what could you possibly be Plotting over there?” said the first of his coven Impurrits. “I am planning are return of course they have cast us out and will one day pay” looking menacingly at his fellow exiles he said this “For now we are no longer part of there order and shall not be dictated by there rules we shall rule the heavens one day for we will access the Arcanium”. Xandras looking up with complete fear in his eyes stuttered the words out “ MA-ma-mad-ness I say we have no possible way to control it we will destroy ourselves!”. “Calm yourself Xandras im sure our valiant fearless leader shall test these abilities before… endangering the rest of us?”. “Valiant you say? You really resort to mockery at this point in time Elianos?”. “Well of course you didn’t expect me to not mock you did you?”. “ Well of course not but could you please just shut your damn mouth for one minute?” hissed Alisteor. At that moment the door burst open admitting a soldier with his weapon drawn to attack. With a flash of movement Impurritis drew his sword and sliced the man in two. “What have you done!?” yelled Damnos. “Glad to see you can still talk Damnos but in Impurritis’s defense the man was obviously not here to talk..”. Walking across the room and closing the door Mortaris said quietetly in a dangerous voice “I myself have not interest in being stuck on earth for eternity so stop you fething bickering and listen to Alisteor’s plan”. “atleast one of you can still think properly the plan is too infiltrate the greatest nations of this pathetic planet and use there armies and resources to assault the heavens itself”. “Great idea in all Alis but how exactly is it you plan to get these men to the heavens if you hadn’t noticed they don’t exactly posses re gift of flight”. Holding up his hand Alisteor summoned a small flat circular shaped darkness and at the other end of the room a second appeared he sent a piece of parchment through one and it came out the other he had created a portal. One by one they all practiced creating them and at this moment they knew there was no turning back from the dark path they had chosen to take. So begins the journey from the exiled angels of light to the dark lords of magic and destruction.

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND IF I SHOULD EVEN KEEP WRITING IT OR IF ITS REALLY THAT BAD.

Less capslock and more use of the space button

Remember to always start a new paragraph when the speaker changes.

"Can you pick up the tray?" asked Alice as she began to wash the dishes after dinner.

"Of course," replied Jerry.

What's supposed to be happening?

Also please spell check, and then spell check again!

i.e.

This is their story of revenge.

Not

This is there story of revenge.