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Founding Chapter:
N/A
Founding:
3rd founding
Current Chapter Master:
Jari Kaapo
Homeworld:
Klome(Massacred)
Colours:
Yellow and Red split down the middle
Specialty:
Rapid Assault with Jump pack units
Strength:
Full strength
Orginisation:
10 Companies, only variance is each company has 60% Assault squads insted on the norm.
Battle Cry:
"For the Aiatar and for The God-Emperor"

The Space marine Chapter known as the Aiatar were formed from unknown Gene-seed for the specific reasons of destroying Renegade Chapters. When they were Created they were first used as a support force to the Raptors Space marine Chapter. A Chapter created from Raven Guard Gene-seed for the purpose of destroying Renegades & heretics. It was while being a support role to them that they truly found their nitch. They completely abandoned the codex in favor of the Raptors tactics, and warfare specialty. Some of their most notable Campaigns they fought alongside the Raptors, Raven Guard, and any chapter from that particular Gene-seed line. The Aiatar have no homeworld and so they recieve their missions from many different deep space listening posts. Many Chapters refuse to fight alongside The Aiatar due to their unreliability. Whenever they recieve news from their deep space listening posts of a rebellion or revolt, they break lines and abandon their campaigns to head straight for the revolts in hope of finding The Instigator.

Notable Campaigns:
The Broken halo incident: In the M34 the Aiatar are away from Klome and their Home-sector Campaigning alongside the Raptors near the Eye of Terror when news of a neighboring Chapter has broken ties due to unspecified reasons. Taking this as a grave stain to their honour they abandon the campaign and turn back to Klome only to find their homeworld in revolt and flying the banners of the renegade chapter. Jari, and the entirety of his chapter are repulsed by the sight of their world. The decision to virus bomb the planet is made, and withing seconds those who were not in the safety of air locked bunkers are devoured by a living virus. The chapter then Drops onto their Old world and murder every survivor they could find, except the Instigator of the revolt is nowhere to be found, for none are safe from the Ire of the Aiatar. Upon the battles completion, they look upon their world with mixed emotions. Had they been just? Or led by Anger to murder their entire world. None will know. Jari Kaapo then swears to hunt down and kill the Instigator, as he dubbs him, along every other renegade he finds. They now are fleet based, and are allowed to draw recruits from worlds they deem worthy.

Very interesting. I would perhaps recommend just editing it a bit to make things flow better and maybe just flesh things out a bit more but I think your idea are very very cool.

The one part that I reckon is pure gold is "The Instigator" such an ominous character.

Thankyou, and i plan on fleshing them out alot more.

Characters of Note:
Imperium: Jari Kaapo Chapter master of the Aiatar, Aican Tolter Captain of the 1st Company, Mikael Fabian Captian of the Ultramarines 3rd company, Xmmian Cyrel Captain of the White consuls 4th company, Captain Josef Nyman of the Imperial fists Assault company.
Xenos: Rotgob and da stinktoofs.
Misc.: The Instigator.




In the year 236.M34 My world Klome fell to The Instigator and his rabble of Renegades. That bastard has hidden himself so well, yet starts revolts everywhere leaving me clues of his next attack. I've followed him all around the Galaxy and back. Only ever glimpsing him in my dreams before he dissapears again, and another world falls prey to the fell Gods of Chaos. I have sworn my life & death to the pursuit of him. The Minotaurs calls us poor excuses for Marines, and The Ultramarines always gloss themselves as perfect. Saying we need to finish a campaign for once instead of promising victory, then abandoning many chapters for a whim. They know not that our honour is forever stained until we hunt down The Instigator.

Part 1 Unfinished Campaigns.

In the silence of space a massive fleet prowls the inky darkness, the flagship, Ire of Ai, stands out amongst the fleet. With its massive EMP cannon, it is a master of interference and sabotage. Able to send false messages and scrap code, while simultaneously jamming radar and all comms, on a entire planet. She slinks forward to a massive campaign front, where the Aiatar are requested to serve as a support role to the Ultramarines, White Consuls, and Imperial fists against the massive Ork Waagh! Rotgob. -232.M34. ' The Fire of Klome is sending us a vox my lord. We are nearing the Warfront, and our Allied brothers who are there already. Mikael Fabian, Xmmian Cyrel, and Josef Nyman, all requested you vox them my lord.' -spoke a serf. ' Tell them we will arrive in approximately six terran hours, Deny their voxes. Open the Deep space listening posts. and search for news of the Instigator.' 'My lord I am but a serf, I cannot talk to captains of the space marines like such. '[i]' You will speak as commanded by me. Send that now!' ' My Lord your captains request audience before we arrive to the Frontlines ' -said a monotonous voice Kaapo instantly recognized as the brilliant and tactile Aican, of 1st assault company. ' Aican, my son, bring them. ' -requested Kaapo. Three large armoured figures took long pompous strides up to Kaapo in the Bride. 'Jyri Salo, Ailis Ruutu, Esko Iharnaki. Men of the Ai. We near an Ork incursion, Do remember to conduct yourself appropriately. I have little need for squabbles amongst our own banners. ' 'You know just as well as we. The Aiatar is a snake that strikes when prodded, Kaapo. No one will hold themselves back, tis our way is it not? '-the voice speaking was more truly the embodiment of an Aiatar, than any Marine in the chapter, ' Hold your tongue snake.. you'd do well to remember yourself. ' -Kaapo glared hard at Ailis. ' Jyri, Esko, you two are going to form the 1st Coil, and go directly into saboteur techniques. Ailis and Aican, I expect you to meet these warriors Mikael, Xmmian, and Josef. Watch them close, and be prepared to leave at any time, we may have a lead on the Instigator. ' Suddenly Ailis face grew stern as did the rest of the captains. 'We will fight quick then so we may find the Instigator. ' - Ailis spoke. 'Good, prepare to drop, SERF! Rouse the Aiatar! ' There were cheers of approval, and in the depths of the Ire of Ai, the great beast named the Aiatar, started from it's slumber, and sent ear splitting shrieks through the bowels of the ship.

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Very good man, enjoyed it!