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Hey everyone! just wanted to share with you a intro I made for my youtube videos! It's already 7:17 AM and I never went to bed! so if you guys see any mistakes please let me know! and please give me feedback on what you think about it! thank youuuu!!!!

Fairly good. Nice break from the usual animations that I usually tend to just blank out these days.

Some ideas>

A) You change font and font colour in the transition from the video to the black screen? Why? I would stick with either the red&white or the green one throughout.

B) Add the URL to your Youtube Channel in the final black screen so people know where they would find more if the video is embedded somewhere.

C) Also, in my version, the top line in the first part "target ID acquired", etc.. is partly blocked by the YouTube dropdown (share, like, etc..). Probably better if you push those lines further down.

Excellent points! thank you very much I will prob be changing a few things!