Ok... so after taking a look at the list again, I realise that it... had alot of work that could be done on it
lol
I created another list for you to check out

any feedback would be brilliant. Thanks alot
HQ
Chaos Lord
Combat Familiar
Combi bolter
Chainaxe
Veteran of the long war
Melta Bombs
101 pts
Elite
3x Terminators
2x pairs of lightning claws
1x Chainfist
Veterans of the long war
130 pts
Troops
9x Chaos space marines
Close combat weapons
Bolt Pistols
Flamer
132 pts
10 Chaos space marines
Plasma Gun
Autocannon
165 pts
Fast Attack
5x Chaos Raptors
Meltagun
Power Weapon
Plasma Pistol
135 pts
Heavy Support
Forgefiend
Additional ectoplasm Launcher
200pts
Vindicator
Siege Shield
Combi Bolter
135 pts
998 pts
I was considering dropping some upgrades somewhere to get the close combat squad of marines an icon of vengeance to make them fearless as it would help them in close combat as a possible alternative to what it is now.