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Warhammer 40k

I will spare you the hole thing to a warhammer shory story.
John
"Ork warboss Snagrod... hahaha that is a name, i will never forget that beast".Cpr Ben"While Sgt if the space marine`s are here cant we stop them?"'Wait did you hear that boy. Ork Nob "Waaaaaaagh! Sgt"Get to the radio tower and call for backup i will deal with these Greenskin`s.Snagrod "Get dem humies boyz!".Ork horde "WAAAAAAGH".Ben jumps into the tower and looks back the big green beast with guns mad from parts of other guns, scar`s, some had clubs, some were big ork`s, some were little snortings or Gratchins.But Ben did not have must time to look he jumped on the radio as the alarm of the base went of and what was left of the Imperial gaurd in the sneak attack woke up and ran outside to fight.Comminsar Hons was yelling from his tank "All men to your battle station"He did not even have time to finsh it before a ork blew his head of.Ben turned on the radio and yelled this is Check point bravo from Hive city gen. we need backup the hole ork army seem`s to want to party!A voice answerd it said this is the Death corps of kreig 157th, the cadins seem to lose control of the planet, we are inbound to help the crimson fist in the attack, may the"The radio turned of as a ork blew the radio aprt along with ben.A ork walked over and said"Stupid humie i ding you are to weak to be da bosses slave`s".

Part one, i will not post the rest of this website unless you request it since i will be writeing the rest of this on notepad.

Why not use a word processor to write it?
At any rate it's certainly a short story...

I should have done that hmmmm, well next time i guess.

It's a good idea to check spelling and grammar since it can be especially jarring while reading.

Your dialogue is somewhat badly formatted...