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Hey all! This is my entry for a local painting competition.











C & C wanted!

Thanks,

Lucarikx

It looks like it's probably pretty awesome, but the brightness of the flash makes it hard to see details. My initial impression is good though.

Thanks! I'll try to get clearer images soon.

Lucarikx

Very cool looking, the blood is a little over the top, but, well, it's Khorne, so I think that's okay

The stringy bits of blood are a too static looking. The strings of gore should droop down a bit. Also the ends of the strings probably shouldn't be so far apart, as the gore simply would not stretch like melted cheese
Keep the ends closer together and in patches and places where blood would be likely to splatter after a kill.
Hope that helps

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Lucarikx

Yeah the flash kind of drowns out al the detail :(
Like the technique you used for the gore, but the 'strings' are just too long imho, stretching all the way from his backpack to an axe seems unlikely to me ^^

Gorgeous, but we want pics with less flash please, outdoors if possible Posing looks sweet tho!

Kinda bloody? ~ it looks like this chaos marine arrived to the battlefield via a Red Cross blood bank, then slid down a bloody slip-n-slide and then ran through a slaughter house! He's quite bloody.....looks great though...nice blood effects.

Looks great! Gore is fun. Agree with the comments about the flash though - it'd be easier to see the details without the flash.

Not enough blood.

Nice conversion! the blood looks bloody, which is good, but not really liquid looking, i agee about the flash but i get a pretty good image of what it looks like in my head. Good work! hes going to grow up looking like his papa

Looks like he forcefully exited a Tyranid hiveship.