A few tips;
Njal
If you're going for a fluffy list with character, Njal is fine. But for combat effectiveness, you may get more mileage from 2 stock rune priests than one Njal Stormcaller. You'll even have 45 points to spare to give them wargear.
4 Wolf Guard
4 Termi
1 Thunder +SS
1 Frost Blade
The frost blade is waste of points. Take a wolf claw instead. The reroll's to wound that the
WC give you are better than the 5 strength the
FB gives you. Especially since you don't get an extra attack with the
FB for having a pistol. Also ... The
WC is only 5 points vs. 25 for the
FB. ( I think it's 25 anyway, but in any case it's more expensive than a
WC.)
I like the thunder-hammer, but I think it's a little overpriced. Personally, I'd take a powerfist instead but it's a personal choice. The only problem with taking a
PF +
SS combo is finding either a left handed powerfist bit or a left handed storm shield to put on the mini.
Also, this squad really needs a drop pod. It'll lose some effectiveness by getting shot up with plasma as it walks up to the enemy.
5 Wolf Guard
5 Combi m
Drop pod
Yep. I like this one. Consider adding a powerfist and / or a couple of wolf claws so that you can threaten an assault after you melt the tank.
10 Wolf Guard
3 Power Weap
9 Storm Bolters
1 Termi + Assault C
I'm conflicted about this one. I see the benefit of 9 storm bolters, but it seems like an expensive way to get more bolters. Why not just take another 10 man
GH squad and add the assault cannon as a
WG leader?
10 GreyHunters
Plasma
Plasma
Power weap
10 GreyHunters
Plasma
Plasma
Power weap
I like these, but I'd much rather have
MotW than a
PW and a Wolf Standard is very nice too.
6 LongFangs
5 Missles
6 LongFangs
5 Missles
Long Fangs are obligatory. Good choice.
Psyker
10 Veterans
3 flamers
10 Veterans
1 autocannon
1 grenade L
And now you've lost me. I don't see the benefit of
IG allies unless you're going to take something good. Grey hunters are better than
IG veterans in every respect. What is the point of this exactly? Just get more space wolves.