I have been looking for a template to paint these guys, forgeworld won't release a painting guide for them until they release the rules for the Fists.
I really like the way the tabard and the leather straps off the arms look but you are right the shoulder pads look to much like them. I used Agrax Earthshade over the whole thing maybe I should throw another coat of wash to try and darken them up. So red wouldn't work on the shoulder pads? That would be the easiest fix
I am not much of a painter and while I admit the red does stand out, I can't free hand a stripe down the helmet so its pretty much going to stay as is.
For my first attempt I am happy with how he looks so far.