For a first attempt at OSL, it's really well done! Hell, overall, its really well done!
The only things I could suggest doing, if you haven't already, is get few extra highlights on the brass portions. Another interesting touch would be to add a little bit of colour to the veins on his biceps (completely unnecessary, its really just for the hell of it). For example, a lot of the visible veins on a human have a blue tint to them, you may want to do something similar just to add an extra bit of colour.
Otherwise, great job. I especially like the the work you did on the skin tones for each body and the Weirdboy's tunic.
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