What
TheKbob said. Blood Claws are a mistake. Grey Hunters do everything better for the same price, and if 'fluff' is your argument that also doesn't make sense since there are more Grey Hunters in a Great Company than anything else. Giving Blood Claws any kind of special ranged weapon is doubly a mistake (
maybe a flamer would be okay). The Power Fist is okay however, if you get a charge off. I'd recommend a Power Axe instead though, if anything.
By switching your Blood Claws to Grey Hunters you can keep the unit price exactly the same and ditch the Power Fist for a Wolf Standard and Mark of the Wulfen, which is what makes Grey Hunters much more powerful in close combat than Blood Claws.
Your Wolf Guard really should have a Combi-Melta or Combi-Plasma, and I would not give them anything that makes them Unwieldy. Chainfists are definitely a waste, if you insist on giving them anything other than a Wolf Claw it should be a Power Fist or Frost Blade to keep costs down. Chainfists are good on Lone Wolves though. I'd keep them in
TDA myself, but Combi/Wolfclaw.
I think x5 Lascannons is insanely over priced and putting your eggs all in one basket. I'd mix up your Long Fang packs a bit so you have 3-4
ML and 1-2 Lascannons in each pack. Since you can split fire you aren't as likely to lose all your S9 AP2 ranged attacks in one round. You may also find 3 Long Fang packs to be overkill. Two (with x3
ML and x2
LC) would likely be enough and you are going to be left with a lot of points left over, between them and trimming the Wolf Guard wargear (20pts/model).
Seriously, that'd be like 80 pts saved on the Wolf Guard, and 155 pts by mixing up the Long Fangs and cutting a pack. So 235 points. Your Grey Hunter packs (or Blood Claws if you refuse to change them) are 190 points leaving another 45. What I would then do is change out the
CML for an Assault Cannon (or you could leave it the same) and use that 5th Wolf Guard in this added Grey Hunter pack. You still have 45 points left, so give one of the Long Fang packs a Drop Pod.
This gives you 7 Drop Pods total. Deploy the Long Fang pack and use their Drop Pod in your second wave, and you have 4 Grey Hunter packs coming down on Turn 1.
You have 10 points left over and a surprising array of options. If it were me, I would drop two of the Plasma Guns in your Grey Hunters down to Meltaguns, and give those Wolf Guard leading them Combi-Melta instead of Combi-Plasma. With the now 20 points left over, give four of your Wolf Guard
TDA Meltabombs so they can handle any Dreadnought that comes in to play.
Heh, just realized we made the list I'd been playing for a while basically. Mine is at 1850 mind you and my
LF are kitted a little differently and I don't have the
ADL. Funny!