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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 18:18:53
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Dark Angels Neophyte Undergoing Surgeries
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 18:27:19
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Secretive Dark Angels Veteran
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Firstly, you forgot to remove mold lines :(
Try to thin the paint a little,with distilled water + flow aid and possibly matte medium, try using a wash over a base with a layer of highlight on the cloth's, this should give a more natrual looking shadow compared to the hard edges.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 18:37:57
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Dark Angels Neophyte Undergoing Surgeries
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HairySticks wrote:Firstly, you forgot to remove mold lines :(
Try to thin the paint a little,with distilled water + flow aid and possibly matte medium, try using a wash over a base with a layer of highlight on the cloth's, this should give a more natrual looking shadow compared to the hard edges.
I did do a base with Zandri Dust and washed with Nuln Oil. I went over the higher parts with Ushabti Bone. I am guessing I had too much paint on the brush because the paint was pretty thin (sort of like a milk consistency).
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 18:48:52
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Nasty Nob
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Even at this stage, I'd wash them again. The highlights look very stark, a wash should soften them a bit and hopefully bring them all together abit more.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 19:15:51
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Dark Angels Neophyte Undergoing Surgeries
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Joyous_Oblivion wrote:Even at this stage, I'd wash them again. The highlights look very stark, a wash should soften them a bit and hopefully bring them all together abit more.
Thanks for the tip, I think that will work beautifully.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 19:37:14
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Secret Inquisitorial Eldar Xenexecutor
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Grafeld wrote:HairySticks wrote:Firstly, you forgot to remove mold lines :(
Try to thin the paint a little,with distilled water + flow aid and possibly matte medium, try using a wash over a base with a layer of highlight on the cloth's, this should give a more natrual looking shadow compared to the hard edges.
I did do a base with Zandri Dust and washed with Nuln Oil. I went over the higher parts with Ushabti Bone. I am guessing I had too much paint on the brush because the paint was pretty thin (sort of like a milk consistency).
I would suggest adding a second step of zandri dust into your work. Currently your two colours showing are washed Zandri (quite dark) and Ushabti (quite light). If you highlight with Zandri after the wash and do a final highlight of Ushabti following that you will get a much smoother transition.
Washed Zandri > Zandri > Ushabti
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 19:56:50
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Fixture of Dakka
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Well first off:Mold Lines.
Second I like the style you've used. Intentional or not it gives them a sort of cell shaded look, that I'm sure would look great as a whole army.
In recent years we've pushed more and more to realism, and I miss cool ideas that aren't out of Scale Modeller magazine. If you made your Vehicles look cell shaded too that'd be epic. Like playing against a Scanner Darkly army.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/05/27 20:35:16
Subject: Trying out a new style, would like feedback and critique.
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Hoary Long Fang with Lascannon
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I see what you're going for, and you're certainly on the right track. The border between the mid and base tones an the highlights is a bit stark, as others have said, a wash will help blend. Along with thinning the paint (just a little water is sufficient in this case), painting the highlights in smaller areas rather than bigger patches may help too. Boots look great IMO. I think the lighting may have a lot to do with it too as it's all a bit over exposed, or over lit. Keep up the good work!
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