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Looks fine to me; the only thing I'd suggest doing differently in any major way is the blonde hair - avoid using yellow as a base; instead use a yellow brown (something like VGC Heavy brown / Khemri Brown) and highlight up with a little yellow added to that at first then go toward a bleached bone / sand colour. Actual yellow-yellow (if you follow me) looks wrong, even for 'yellow blonde' hair.