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So I'm doing a second marine army wich are going to be the Crimson fists.
This is a list that's at 1999 points and aimed to be more of a fun to play list instead of a play to win list. I'm just trying not to make a terrible list wich get tabled way to easily. Plus I'm trying to keep it somewhat fluffy to the Crimson Fists. So the basics are mostly Scouts and Sternguard Veterans.
Some criticism and help on it would be appriciated.

(Only the buyable options are written down.)
HQ (275pts)
Chaplain (100pts)
Bolt Pistol, Power Armour
Chapter Master Pedro Kantor (175pts)

Elites (540pts)
Dreadnought (150pts)
Missile Launcher, Twin-Linked Heavy Flamer
Drop Pod, Storm Bolter

Sternguard Veteran Squad (195pts)
4x Combi-Melta, 4x Veteran
Space Marine Sergeant, Boltgun, Power Weapon
Drop Pod, Storm Bolter

Sternguard Veteran Squad (195pts)
4x Combi-Plasma, 4x Veteran
Space Marine Sergeant, Boltgun, Power Weapon
Drop Pod, Storm Bolter

Troops (424pts)
Scout Squad (122pts)
6x Scout, 6x Camo Cloaks, 6x Sniper Rifle
Scout Sergeant, Camo Cloak, Combat Blade, Sniper Rifle

Scout Squad (122pts)
6x Scout, 6x Camo Cloaks, 6x Sniper Rifle
Scout Sergeant, Camo Cloak, Combat Blade, Sniper Rifle

Tactical Squad (180pts)
Heavy Bolter, Plasma Gun, 9x Space Marine
Space Marine Sergeant, Boltgun, Chainsword

Fast Attack (270pts)
Land Speeder Squadron (270pts)
Land Speeder, Heavy Bolter, Typhoon Missile Launcher
Land Speeder, Heavy Bolter, Typhoon Missile Launcher
Land Speeder, Heavy Bolter, Typhoon Missile Launcher

Heavy Support (390pts)
Devastator Squad (190pts)
2x Lascannon, 2x Missile Launcher, 4x Space Marine
Devastator Space Marine Sergeant, Bolt Pistol, Chainsword

Thunderfire Cannon (100pts)

Thunderfire Cannon (100pts)

Fortification (100pts)
Aegis Defense Line (100pts)
Gun emplacement with quad-gun.

I don't see what the chaplain adds to your list, fluffwise or anything. You don't really have any unit that he will benefit very much.

I would get more sternguard if you have pedro, and either drop the dread for another sternguard squad or make it an ironclad. More expensive, but much better out of a pod. Drop your power weapons off your sarges, and make one squad combi melta, the other combi plasma to deal with varied threats.

2 scout squads and 2 techmarines from your TFC's should be a good combo so you can get them a nice cover save. The relic blades are free, so why not but don't expect your scouts to actually use them.

Consider splitting the typhoons into three seperate squads so your opponent has to work harder to kill them and so you can split their fire up.

Also, a new codex is dropping for marines soon, so things will probably get shaken up.