Looking pretty good! I like the fluff for her. Suitably badass, just what would be appropriate for a Canoness character. The emphasis on vehicles and outflanking is also nice, gives some flexibility and goes with her fluff as being a tactical
gen- tactically adept.
A few things:
- Nitpicky, but you may want to make a small addendum to the "Inspirational Leader" rule. Independant characters already add a +1 on
AoF rolls when they join a squad. You may want to clarify in the rule's description that it stacks with that existing bonus.
- The Repentia thing: not sure that a Canoness would go around killing Repentias, or just suddenly accepting them back as actual Sisters. It is a very well established practice in the Orders Militant. All of the Major Orders do it, and they even appoint Mistresses to watch over the Repentias and decide when they are redeemed. It's all very official and that. Was there a gameplay reason you didn't want them in, perhaps? Like them not fitting with her playstyle? If so then by all means keep it, just not sure about the current fluff behind it.