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So I wrote a 2000 point gunline list in hopes for a more competitive space marine army list, and was hoping for any critiques of my unit choice

HQ
Chapter master w/ Primarchs Wrath 150

Librarian 65

Troop
Tacticals w/ vet, Plasma gun and cannon x2 360

Tacticals w/ vet, heavy bolter x2 280

Elites
Sternguard, all bolt guns 230

Fast Attack
Land Speeders w/ dual heavy bolters x3 180

Heavy Support
Devs 3x lascannon, missile, full squad 215

Devs, flak missiles, full squad 240

Devs, Heavy Bolters, full squad 180

Fortification
Aegis w/ quad gun 100

Total:100

my plan is to have most of my army either in ruins or behind the Aegis, and just mow down anyone who comes near, or picking them off with long range weaponry. please pos tany opinions or criticisms on my list below.

Looks good but I don't think the gun line is the best way to run marine lists. You don't have enough shooting to take out a very fast assault army like daemons and you don't have the mobility to capture or contest enemy objectives. If my daemon list faced this it wouldn't fear me because you don't have any ignores cover weaponry my horrors could go to ground behind my aegis and laugh at you with a 2+ reroll able cover save. To make your list better I suggest adding in two thunder fire cannons there stupidly good at taking out objective campers. And try and make your speeders typhoon with heavy bolter (best build by far)