I didn't get any advice with my previous topic, I figured through saying too much

Or lack of pre-made army lists to critique or something.
But in regards to a 2000pt 'friendly' list i.e I'm not spamming
LR's or grav guns as I could be, I've come up with this list which I'm hoping
will still have some kick to it and while being 'fun' might still be mildly competitive! Enough so for a local
GW or gaming club.
I know I will struggle with flyer heavy lists though I'm honestly hoping to be able to 'ignore' fliers though at the local
GW or gaming club I
don't expect to be playing against super flyer spam lists.
I like bikes, kinda iffy about having them as they'res only 3 though. Tempted to swap out for more assault marines!
Anyway here's the list -
Critique feelings, advice, comments wanted!
SPACE MARINES - Minotaurs
Army List: 2000pts
HQ points used: 655pts
TROOP points used: 160pts
ELITE points used: 625pts
FAST ATTACK points used: 253pts
HEAVY SUPPORT points used: 315pts
--- Total points used: 2008pts
HQ(s)
Lord Asterion Moloc
Minotaur Chaplain Ivanus Enkomi
Royal Spartan Command Squad
5 Storm shields
5 Power Lances
Nartheceum
Chapter Banner
TROOP(s)
Tactical Squad
Heavy Bolter
Tactical Squad
Heavy Bolter
ELITE(s)
Spartan Vanguard Veterans
5 Storm Shields
5 Power Lances
Jump packs
Legion of the Damned
Flamer
Heavy Flamer
Power Fist
Spartan Terminator Assault Squad
5 Storm Shields
FAST ATTACK (s)
Assault squad
+5 Assault Marines
Bike Squadron
2 Meltagun
HEAVY SUPPORT (s)
Spartan Assault Tank
Armoured Cermite
----- OPTIONAL/EXPANSION SELECTIONS -----
TOTAL POINTS: 650pts
Centurion Devestator Squad
+3 Centurion Devestators
6 Grav Cannon & Grav Amp
ALLIED DETATCHMENT - DARK ANGELS
Total Points:
HQ
Librarian -
Conversion field
(Deploys in Centurion Devestator Squad)
TROOP
Tactical Squad -