This is a tweaked version of the original where the entire chapter was made up of untouchables (long before I signed up to this forum), so I've made some changes to make it more plausible.
I won't be delving into their lore properly until the chapter's composition works (note I want to keep the untouchable element in).
So please tell me what you think and where alteration could be made.
Home Brew Chapter : The Scions of Ragnarok
Why it was founded: Strategic Prognostication.
When it was founded: Unknown – Suspected 21st founding.
Chapter's Progenitor: Unknown
Gene Purity: Flawed - set apart from progenitor.
Chapter Demeanour: No Mercy, No Respite.
Gene Mutation: Relatively high chance battle brothers are "Untouchables".
Chapter Flaws: Pride in the Colours.
Figure of Legend: Chapter Master -Slew a daemon Prince
Home World Name: Jotunheim
Home World Characteristics: Uninhabited Ice World
Rule of Home World: Direct Rule
Chapter organisation: Unique
Combat Doctrine: Close combat
Units the chapter does now field: Librarians, Centurions, Storm Ravens
Totemic charm/s : Armour is adorned with ancient runes and glyphs.
Special Vehicle:A single Warhound Titan (Mars Pattern),
Modified Land Raider -Ravager: armed with Front dual assault cannon, 4 hurricane bolters (2 either side), frag launchers, reduced transport capacity.
Chapter Beliefs: Honour the Ancestors
Strength: Under Strength – 895 Total.
Chapter Allies: Inquisition, Tau
Chapter Enemies: Tyranids
Successor Chapters: Fire Giants - 23rd Founding
Astral Bears – 25 Founding
Chapter Terminology.
Cohorts – Equivalent of companies.
The Einherjar – Veteran 1st company
Hersir Slayers – The chapter's terminators (Tartaros pattern).
Ulfsark Squads – Mixture of tactical marines and scouts.
Huskarl Squads – Devastator squads which typically use heavy bolters and flamers.
Stridende Squads – Assault squads
Aspirant – Scout
The Bannlyst Kin – This is made up from the chapter's untouchables, and are believed to chosen by the god Emperor to bear such a gift. As a result of this they're issued with some of the most advanced armour, weapons and equipment the chapter has at it's disposal. Such equipment also includes personal teleporters similar to those used by the Grey Knights' Interceptor Squads.
The Bannlyst Kin are also the most rigorously trained members of the chapter, becoming masters of melee combat.
Chapter Organisation
Chapter Master: Caldris Thor - 1 handed Daemon Hammer
- Wrist mounted plasma weapon
- Wears Blessed artificer armour and a jump pack.
- Iron Halo
-...
Honour Guard: - 2 handed relic axes
- Wrist mounted bolters
- Artificer armour
Chapter Standard Bearer: - The Shroud of Jotunheim
-Thunder Hammer
-Artificer armour
Chapter Champion: - Artificer armour
2 Master crafted power Falchions.
1st Cohort- The Einherjar (Veteran Company)- Total - 65
Chapter Master Caldris Thor, 2 Honour Guards, Chapter Standard Bear, Chapter Champion
Cohort Captain, Champion, Chaplain, Apothecary , Standard Bearer
3 Contemptor Dreadnaughts
4 Venerable Dreadnaughts
45 Hersir Slayers (Tartaros Pattern Terminators)
2nd Cohort - 160
Jarl Grenjar Vidgis – Armed with relic blade and power fist.
2 Hersir Slayers guards
Cohort Captain, Champion, Chaplain, Apothecary , Standard Bearer
4 Venerable dreadnoughts
2 Dreadnoughts
10 Tartaros terminators
4 Ulfsark Squads (1 squad = 8 x marine and 4 x scouts)
4 Stridende Squads
4 Huskarl Squads
3rd Cohort - 215
Jarl Hreidmar Thrakkrad – Armed with Lightning Claws.
2 Hersir Slayers guards
Cohort Captain, Champion, Chaplain, Apothecary , Standard Bearer
3 venerable dreadnoughts
2 dreadnoughts
10 Tartaros terminators
8 Ulfsark Squads (1 squad = 8 x marine and 4 x scouts)
3 Stridende Squads
3 Huskarl Squads
4th Cohort - 155
Jarl Gudrek Volund, 2 Hersir Slayers guards
Cohort Captain, Champion, Chaplain, Apothecary , Standard Bearer
1 venerable dreadnoughts
4 dreadnoughts
10 Tartaros terminators
3 Ulfsark Squads (1 squad = 8 x marine and 4 x scouts)
6 Stridende Squads
3 Huskarl Squads
5th Cohort - 167
Jarl Sigvaht Geir 2 Hersir Slayers guards
Cohort Captain, Champion, Chaplain, Apothecary , Standard Bearer
2 venerable dreadnoughts
3 dreadnoughts
10 Tartaros terminators
6 Ulfsark Squads (1 squad = 8 x marine and 4 x scouts)
3 Stridende Squads
3 Huskarl Squads
6th Cohort – The Bannlyst Kin - 80
Jarl Thorkel Olmodr – Master of the Bannlyst, 2 Bannlyst Honour Guard
Cohort Captain, Champion, Chaplain, Apothecary, Standard Bearer
12 Bannlyst Interceptor Squads (6 x marine)
7th Cohort (scouts) - 53
Cohort Captain, Chaplain, Apothecary
10 Scout Squads.
