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please post comments on helpful suggestion on what maybe should be changed and why you think so

Loremaster (Armor of Caledor)-----combat lord

2 Lv2 mages Dispel scrollx2-----support mages (high magic, Metal/shadow)

Korhil-----challenger

39 Spearmen 8x5 with full command and banner of discipline (Korhil here)-----the anvil

20 archers (2 groups of 10 with a mage in each group) ------support

2 lion chariots ----- hammer # 2 flankers

29 White lions Fullcommand Banner of the World Dragon (loremaster here)-----the hammer

3 eagles---- the hunters

10 Sisters ---- more hunters AKA very big thorn

3 RBT---- support/monster hunter

Firstly, by my (mental) calculations, you're a little short on Core. You have 596 and you need 625. Another three archers should sort that out.

Now, if you're being competitive, you need to sort your characters out. Firstly, you NEED a Level 4 Wizard and a BSB. Drop your 2 Level 2s and get a Level 4 Archmage with the Book of Hoeth and some form of protection (e.g. Golden Crown). It's up to you what Lore you run with him, but personally I would use Life Magic. Secondly, drop Korhil and replace him with a Noble (or Sea Helm) BSB. Get him fairly well kitted out with defensive items (such as the Shield of the Merwyrm or the Talis. of Endurance). If you're looking for a combat character, then you can give him a cheap magic weapon or a great weapon. Finally, give your Loremaster a Dispel Scroll. This gives you a good amount of Magic (and combat prowess) for a decent amount of points. Stick one of the characters in the Spearmen, so you can have a Ld10 General from the Banner of Discipline.

I would then consider dropping the Lion Chariots. They hit hard, sure, but they do die pretty easily. They're not the most competitive choice. I think you'd get more value out of a flanking unit of Dragon Princes or some MSU Swordmasters.

Other than that, the list looks pretty good, hope this has helped!

Shadow's points are all good ones. An Archmage is an auto include in a competitive HE list and you need a BSB Noble. If your heart is set on keeping the Loremaster then that is fine, however he doesn't fit the role of 'combat hero'. A Noble is on equal footing in terms of combat prowess, but the Loremaster is a good support caster for the Archmage so there's no need to scrap him completely. Giving him the Ring of Fury for the High Magic lore attribute is handy, as well as a good armour/ward save.

Noble+Standard of discipline on his unit also pretty much compulsory in the absence of a Ld10 general.

With 2 units of archers and the sisters 3 RBTs might be overkill. Possibly drop a bolt thrower and one eagle as well as the lion chariots for a solid unit of Dragon Princes and this list is starting to look very tough.