uhh no. sorry.
but heres some changes to make it good
1) drop all upgrades from fragons. you wont be needing any of them.
2)remove all upgrades from 5 man dire avenger squad.
3) take out
eml ASAP. no bigger point sink than those sadly. would recomend shuiken cannons or scatter lasers instead.
4) tak out wraithgaurd on foot, will justdie to easily.
5)remove upgrades from warp spiders in favor of more bodies.
6)REMOVE FALCON. urrrhgg hate falcons.
7) take out spirit stones from serpents and instead add shuinken cannons.
8) with points from falcon, wraithgaurd, and upgrades gone, get a serpent for dire avengers if you dont have anotehr serpent model, proxy falcon as one.(SOO SOOO much better than falcon. in every way. )
8) take out spirit sear instead for luaghing sear (if any of your farseers are on bikes)
10) get d scythes for wraithgaurd.
then your good to go.