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HQ

overlord 190pts
warscythe
orb
sempiternal weave
phase shifter

2 harbingers of the storm

harbinger of despair 60pts
veil of darkness

destroyer lord 160pts
sempiternal weave
MSS

Troops

10 immortals 170pts

5 immortals 85pts
nightscythe 100pts

5 immortals 85pts
nightscythe 100pts

Fast Attack

6 wraiths 230pts
2 whip coils

Heavy Support

annihilation barge 90pts

annihilation barge 90pts

annihilation barge 90pts

the overlord joins the 10 immortals on the ground with the veil just in case i need to contest with them or get rid of a dangerous unit or vehicle with rapid fire gauss, 2 small immortal units in scythes to capture late objectives with storm teks just in case i need to get rid of any vehicles nearby and just for extra shots. The dlord joins the wraiths as a counter to CC units and is a distraction unit, and the 3 barges for AA and anti-MC.

Nice list. Similar to my usual build. Should work nicely.
Whats the points total? Looks like 1500 at a glance, but if you put the total in people would be more likely to comment.

It seems okay, but it seems like you sunk most of your points into you HQs. I think that you might want more troops on the board to start with, because the scythes won't come in until at least turn 2, and thats if you made your first reserve roll. You also might want a cheap, big warrior unit to soak up some damage.