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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/01/23 21:02:50
Subject: Looking for feedback.
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Lord of the Fleet
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http://darkreign.org/lapidescruentis/
Again, little things I finance for DR. But again rarely get feedback.
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Fate is in heaven, armor is on the chest, accomplishment is in the feet. - Nagao Kagetora
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/01/23 21:23:16
Subject: Re:Looking for feedback.
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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I'm confused was it you who drew the comics?
If so, I can't really talk about the drawing, I suck at it myself but if I'm allowed my 2 cents, let me say the character's expressions are pretty good, they seem to express what they should be feeling at the time.
About the dialogue, you managed to get some chuckles from me. That *facepalm* moment was spot-on  and the pervert guard should be a running gag of it's own
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"Fear is freedom! Subjugation is liberation! Contradiction is truth! These are the truths of this world! Surrender to these truths, you pigs in human clothing!" - Satsuki Kiryuin, Kill la Kill |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/01/23 21:48:48
Subject: Re:Looking for feedback.
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Lord of the Fleet
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TheDraconicLord wrote:I'm confused was it you who drew the comics?
If so, I can't really talk about the drawing, I suck at it myself but if I'm allowed my 2 cents, let me say the character's expressions are pretty good, they seem to express what they should be feeling at the time.
About the dialogue, you managed to get some chuckles from me. That *facepalm* moment was spot-on  and the pervert guard should be a running gag of it's own 
No, I wrote it. Ana Santo http://morganadulac.deviantart.com does the artwork.
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Fate is in heaven, armor is on the chest, accomplishment is in the feet. - Nagao Kagetora
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/01/23 22:16:05
Subject: Looking for feedback.
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Hangin' with Gork & Mork
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You write comics to gain damage reduction?
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Amidst the mists and coldest frosts he thrusts his fists against the posts and still insists he sees the ghosts.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/01/23 22:36:54
Subject: Looking for feedback.
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Worthiest of Warlock Engineers
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Not bad, if the art is a little plain. like it
*Baronlveagh gains item: MoO's seal of approval (1)*
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Free from GW's tyranny and the hobby is looking better for it
DR:90-S++G+++M++B++I+Pww205++D++A+++/sWD146R++T(T)D+
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2014/01/23 23:27:15
Subject: Looking for feedback.
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Lord of the Fleet
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Fate is in heaven, armor is on the chest, accomplishment is in the feet. - Nagao Kagetora
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